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My First Poem on ABCtales

By luigi_pagano on Sat, 17 Aug 2024

Echoes from the past

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Musings Among Flowering Bushes

By luigi_pagano on Mon, 12 Aug 2024

I talk to the trees

Nature

Story

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The Summer of 1963

By luigi_pagano on Tue, 06 Aug 2024

The weather was hot.

Erotica

Fantasy

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Grace

By luigi_pagano on Tue, 30 Jul 2024

Grace Horsley Darling (24 November 1815 – 20 October 1842) was an English lighthouse keeper's daughter. Her participation in the rescue of survivors...

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Perfection itself. Luigi x

Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020

Perfection itself.

Luigi x

Posted in Deimos

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Another feather in your cap,

Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2020

Another feather in your cap, Rachel. Not only you are a magnificent poet, your dulcet tones are captivating. Brava.

Luigi x

Posted in Meditation

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Exceptional writing as ever,

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

Exceptional writing as ever, Rachel. Just a tiny typo in the second line: should be 'in perigee'.

Luigi x

Posted in Worm Moon

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An interesting read, Drew,

Posted on Mon, 02 Mar 2020

An interesting read, Drew, that reawakened my nostalgic memory of the time when I put an order through for a Sinclair ZX80 and be told - what joy! - that I could have an updated version (the ZX81) for the same price. It had a 1k memory, if I...

Posted in On the Spectrum

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I find villanelle and pantoum

Posted on Wed, 26 Feb 2020

I find villanelle and pantoum very difficult and I tend to steer clear of these forms, Niamh.
Although they can be technically correct by following the rules, the poetic element doesn't always match the effort.
Dylan Thomas' "Do not...

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Drew, for information.

Posted on Wed, 26 Feb 2020

Drew, for information.

The pantoum is a form of poetry similar to a villanelle in that there are repeating lines throughout the poem. It is composed of a series of quatrains; the second and fourth lines of each stanza are repeated as the...

Posted in Toothache

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An interesting and absorbing

Posted on Mon, 24 Feb 2020

An interesting and absorbing little crime thriller in verse, Niamh. I found myself following the clues wanting to know what was stolen. I enjoyed the unusual format.

Kind regards, Luigi x

Posted in What was stolen?

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I saw in the news that a

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

I saw in the news that a young boy, a fan of Manchester United football club, wrote to the Liverpool's manager pleading with him to stop his team winning to give the club he supported a chance.
I am tempted to make a similar plea and ask...

Posted in The Fox Hunt

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Rachel, this must be the

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

Rachel, this must be the apotheosis of your poetry; it can't be surpassed, surely. But, having followed your work closely, I'm certain you are going to prove me wrong. Not only is your use of the language exquisite, your knowledge of Greek...

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A very descriptive poem of a

Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2020

A very descriptive poem of a fierce storm that has caught many unprepared and powerless to do anything except watching the pelting rain on the window panes, with its suggestion of further upheaval, and observe the extensive damage it caused....