The story of faraway persons working - perhaps slaving - in an Indian cloth factory, told in a chatty way as if the author is actually there near or on the assembly line. Very effective.
Tina, this takes me back many years when I was on a course in the Lake district and was persuaded by some of the participants to join them to reach the summit of the Old Man. This I did, in borrowed walking boots, puffing a lot. A venture...
How clever of you, Tina, to use the beginning of W.H.Auden's 'Funeral Blues', but in reverse, as a platform for your poignant message. That picture has become a symbol of the whole tragic situation and has awoken the conscience of many people....
There can be no greater contrast than the image offered by the helicopter, as a war machine, and Wilfred Owen's poem describing the consequences and futility of armed conflicts.
A skilfully crafted poem, Helen. Congratulations.
Very well done with clever rhyming, Rhiannon, and I love the title. It fulfills the brief perfectly.
Verses in rhyme do not seem to be popular on this site but I always enjoy a poem with a bouncy rhythm.
Hi Elsie. Why were you trying to tear yourself away from the site? I know that sometimes it is frustrating when our efforts are not widely read or commented upon but I think this is due to the sheer volume of entries rather than the lack in...
Very ingenious, Rhiannon. It
Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015
Very ingenious, Rhiannon. It must be an advantage knowing how to use graphics and you have come up with a colourful and interesting piece. Well done.
Luigi x
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Your lovely poem exactly
Posted on Sat, 31 Oct 2015
Your lovely poem exactly describes the same thrill that I experience every Thursday at the park with my grandson. Thanks for sharing.
Luigi x
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And some days begin with a
Posted on Tue, 27 Oct 2015
And some days begin with a read of an unforgettable poem, Nicky. So glad to have come across it thanks to those attractive cherries so well deserved.
Luigi x
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The story of faraway persons
Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2015
The story of faraway persons working - perhaps slaving - in an Indian cloth factory, told in a chatty way as if the author is actually there near or on the assembly line. Very effective.
Luigi xxx
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Tina, this takes me back many
Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015
Tina, this takes me back many years when I was on a course in the Lake district and was persuaded by some of the participants to join them to reach the summit of the Old Man. This I did, in borrowed walking boots, puffing a lot. A venture...
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How clever of you, Tina, to
Posted on Sun, 06 Sep 2015
How clever of you, Tina, to use the beginning of W.H.Auden's 'Funeral Blues', but in reverse, as a platform for your poignant message. That picture has become a symbol of the whole tragic situation and has awoken the conscience of many people....
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There can be no greater
Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2015
There can be no greater contrast than the image offered by the helicopter, as a war machine, and Wilfred Owen's poem describing the consequences and futility of armed conflicts.
A skilfully crafted poem, Helen. Congratulations.
Luigi...
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Very well done with clever
Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2015
Very well done with clever rhyming, Rhiannon, and I love the title. It fulfills the brief perfectly.
Verses in rhyme do not seem to be popular on this site but I always enjoy a poem with a bouncy rhythm.
Luigi x
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A good take on the
Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2015
A good take on the Inspiration Point, Rob, with its positive message which is so refreshing. A delight to read.
Best wishes, Luigi
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Hi Elsie. Why were you trying
Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2015
Hi Elsie. Why were you trying to tear yourself away from the site? I know that sometimes it is frustrating when our efforts are not widely read or commented upon but I think this is due to the sheer volume of entries rather than the lack in...
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