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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | Saying Goodbye | luigi_pagano | 10 | 5 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Upon My Soul | luigi_pagano | 2 | 5 years 4 months ago |
| Story | The bottle and spanner | Tom Brown | 19 | 5 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Bubble Trouble | luigi_pagano | 6 | 5 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Eating Out | luigi_pagano | 8 | 5 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Santa's Nightmare | luigi_pagano | 6 | 5 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Hurry Hurry Christmas | forest_for_ever | 2 | 5 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Certain Memories | onemorething | 14 | 5 years 5 months ago |
| Story | The Storyteller | luigi_pagano | 5 | 5 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Reading Matters | luigi_pagano | 4 | 5 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Imagine | luigi_pagano | 8 | 5 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Images to Ponder | Richard L. Prov... | 11 | 5 years 5 months ago |
| Story | A View From the Top | luigi_pagano | 8 | 5 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Wild Rose … | Rhiannonw | 17 | 5 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Memories Of You I Keep | skinner_jennifer | 27 | 5 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Reasons To Be Cheerful | luigi_pagano | 8 | 5 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Black Cats | luigi_pagano | 6 | 5 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Days of Wine and Roses | luigi_pagano | 6 | 5 years 6 months ago |
| Story | The Butcher's Dog | luigi_pagano | 6 | 5 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Zombie Apocalypse | luigi_pagano | 8 | 5 years 6 months ago |
| Story | pool, october | Di_Hard | 8 | 5 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Feeling Blue | luigi_pagano | 12 | 5 years 6 months ago |
| Story | A Reliable Source | luigi_pagano | 4 | 5 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Last Night, on Hallow's Eve | luigi_pagano | 12 | 5 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Comings and Goings | luigi_pagano | 6 | 5 years 6 months ago |








A lovely descriptive poem, Di
Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019
A lovely descriptive poem, Di, with the first three lines as an introduction that grabs the readers' attention right away. The verses that follow reveal that something as mundane as a walk to the shops evoke feelings so deep that one can easily...
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Good use of the language,
Posted on Wed, 27 Mar 2019
Good use of the language, Jane. I like 'orbicular shapes' and the crafty suggestion that Barry Gorringe might rhyme with orange as no other rhymes come readily to mind. I seem to have read that 'door hinge' would be suitable.
Read full commentI too was...
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Eight-lines stanzas. I am
Posted on Wed, 13 Mar 2019
Eight-lines stanzas. I am impressed, Jane. I thought the poem very amusing, what with the lippety lippety rabbits and the strange fellow with the brillo fuzz, not forgetting the main protagonists, the whippets. Brilliant.
Best, Luigi...
Read full commentPosted in He said I was Whippety (Rimus Dissolutas)
You have stuck to the
Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019
You have stuck to the technical brief exceptionally well, Jane. The fact that you were able to cope with the unfortunate situation by composing a little poetic gem is admirable - although small consolation for losing your job.
Best wishes...
Read full commentPosted in Last Week I Lost My Job (Rimus Dissolutas)
Your description of the
Posted on Sun, 17 Feb 2019
Your description of the various feelings that looks can generate is spot on, Graham. They can mean love, passion, jealousy and even hostility. The latter attribute reminds me of the sixties when confrontational Teddy Boys used the expression "wot...
Read full commentPosted in Wot You Lookin' At?(The Eyes Have It)
Ed this is excellent. The
Posted on Thu, 14 Feb 2019
Ed this is excellent. The third stanza is my favourite but I enjoyed the whole poem.
In my opinion it should be Pick of the Day.
Best, Luigi
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Oddily enough, Di, this poem
Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019
Oddly enough, Di, this poem brings to mind the principles of the economic law of diminishing returns: you can invest more and more resources but eventually a saturation point will be reached. It is a meataphor for life itself as your piece...
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I thoroughly agree that it
Posted on Fri, 08 Feb 2019
I thoroughly agree that it wouldn't be a wise move!
Luigi x
P.S...
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A great description of this
Posted on Sat, 02 Feb 2019
A great description of this aristocratic bird, Rhiannon. You always show the environment at its best with style.
Luigi x
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A wish list that will be
Posted on Mon, 17 Dec 2018
A wish list that will be familiar to many. An enjoyable read skillfully written.
Best, Luigi x
P.S. Query: a typo on the second line of the final stanza? ...to the the
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