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And some days begin with a

Posted on Tue, 27 Oct 2015

And some days begin with a read of an unforgettable poem, Nicky. So glad to have come across it thanks to those attractive cherries so well deserved.

Luigi x

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The story of faraway persons

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2015

The story of faraway persons working - perhaps slaving - in an Indian cloth factory, told in a chatty way as if the author is actually there near or on the assembly line. Very effective.

Luigi xxx

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Tina, this takes me back many

Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015

Tina, this takes me back many years when I was on a course in the Lake district and was persuaded by some of the participants to join them to reach the summit of the Old Man. This I did, in borrowed walking boots, puffing a lot. A venture...

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How clever of you, Tina, to

Posted on Sun, 06 Sep 2015

How clever of you, Tina, to use the beginning of W.H.Auden's 'Funeral Blues', but in reverse, as a platform for your poignant message. That picture has become a symbol of the whole tragic situation and has awoken the conscience of many people....

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There can be no greater

Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2015

There can be no greater contrast than the image offered by the helicopter, as a war machine, and Wilfred Owen's poem describing the consequences and futility of armed conflicts.
A skilfully crafted poem, Helen. Congratulations.

Luigi...

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Posted in Chinook (Poetry Monthly)

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Very well done with clever

Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2015

Very well done with clever rhyming, Rhiannon, and I love the title. It fulfills the brief perfectly.
Verses in rhyme do not seem to be popular on this site but I always enjoy a poem with a bouncy rhythm.

Luigi x

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Posted in Grimm Fun (Poetry Monthly)

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A good take on the

Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2015

A good take on the Inspiration Point, Rob, with its positive message which is so refreshing. A delight to read.

Best wishes, Luigi

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Posted in ‘Excuse Me for My Suicide’

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Hi Elsie. Why were you trying

Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2015

Hi Elsie. Why were you trying to tear yourself away from the site? I know that sometimes it is frustrating when our efforts are not widely read or commented upon but I think this is due to the sheer volume of entries rather than the lack in...

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Posted in If

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The products of your fertile

Posted on Sat, 07 Feb 2015

The products of your fertile imagination are neverending , Tina. This is another to add to the collection.

Luigi xxx

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Posted in Girl Watching Goldfish

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Excellent poetry, Bee. An apt

Posted on Mon, 08 Dec 2014

Excellent poetry, Bee. An apt metaphor for the empty nest syndrome. That procreation is no longer possible is seen as the end of a useful existence and even though some vitality remains -

“Still, she glides high with the best, 
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