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Deimos

By onemorething on Sun, 22 Mar 2020

Love

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To wait

By onemorething on Tue, 17 Mar 2020

For all this waiting.

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Ash Trees

By onemorething on Sun, 15 Mar 2020

I did post this last Saturday for the Inspiration Point, but then took it down after about ten minutes as I felt uncomfortable with some of it. So I have chopped some parts and extended others.

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Meditation

By onemorething on Sat, 14 Mar 2020

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I love the idea of the wind

Posted on Thu, 04 Jun 2020

I love the idea of the wind as a vagabond of change and the water of goodwill. Some lovely images. Rachel :)

Posted in Gliding Through Woods

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Such beautiful, grief-laden,

Posted on Sat, 30 May 2020

Such beautiful, grief-laden, weighty lines in your poem as well as images. And as well as being very erudite. I know very little about Lacan. I haven't processed the horror of what I think and feel about what happened to George Floyd yet. I found...

Posted in #BLM

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Ha ha. That's the perfect

Posted on Thu, 28 May 2020

Ha ha. That's the perfect solution, Luigi! I think I will take your advice and when people ask what the rattling noise is coming from them, I'll plead ignorance. Rachel x

Posted in Anger

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This is a sweet idea, I

Posted on Wed, 27 May 2020

This is a sweet idea, I suppose having just posted a poem about anger that listening to them would do me good! Rachel :)

Posted in Look For The Good

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There is a sad hollowing to

Posted on Thu, 28 May 2020

There is a sad hollowing to this and it's perfectly circled for me in the 'there, there'. Full of vulnerability, of subject and writer.

Posted in Lepidoptera

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I have really enjoyed your

Posted on Sun, 24 May 2020

I have really enjoyed your use of language in your latest poems. Nice images here too, as Jenny said. Rachel :)

Posted in The Ocean

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So glad you enjoyed, Luigi. :

Posted on Thu, 21 May 2020

So glad you enjoyed, Luigi. :) I always revel a little when you use words like refined and elegant as I am neither refined nor elegant as a person, but I do enjoy the reflection of the compliment about my poem! Thanks for reading it. Rachel x

Posted in The Promise of Sunlight

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I love the personal elements

Posted on Wed, 13 May 2020

I love the personal elements of this that emphasise its sadness somehow. Very moving indeed and beautifully written.

Posted in Mila

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I agree, the philosophical

Posted on Tue, 12 May 2020

I agree, the philosophical drift of this from one thought leading to another and deepening made me feel sad and hopeful alternately. Love potential and experience, I wonder if it could be calculated like an equation for being. And yes,...

Posted in Out of body rambling

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Sounds very scary Jenny. I'm

Posted on Sun, 10 May 2020

Sounds very scary Jenny. I'm sure they can feel like they are terrorising an area when they do this. Rachel :)