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Worm Rose

I wrote a poem called Shallow Graves once. I have reused the title as I have lost the poem. I don't think it was very cheery. In Sweden, dandelions are called worm roses.
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444 of my comments have received 472 Great Feedback votes

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This is excellent and amusing

Posted on Wed, 18 Mar 2020

This is excellent and amusing . I think we need as much amusement as we can get at the moment. Rachel x

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Posted in Blood Relations

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Thank you. Am very happy that

Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2020

Thank you. Am very happy that you liked it. No, you haven't, but you appear to be giving that a try now and I have buckled, so here you go. I find this mildly terrifying so I might hastily delete and retreat, and am not sure my dulcet tones are...

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Posted in Meditation

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I think you should get on

Posted on Thu, 12 Mar 2020

I think you should get on with it then seeing as there are members of the paying public waiting. Ok. We're not paying, but we are waiting and I'm sure that counts for something. :)

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Posted in Sven Goes to War. Part 1. Warriors of the Wasteland

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I think this is wonderful. :)

Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2020

I think this is wonderful. :)

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Posted in Imagine if we Didn't Feel Pain

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I like the fact that it's

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

I like the fact that it's clear that it is you doing all the watching by the end of the poem.

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Posted in A very scary character

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I like the vulnerability that

Posted on Mon, 02 Mar 2020

I like the vulnerability that weaves through this. It's a really neatly written piece of nostalgia because it works its way back from a present trigger. A good reminder of why we should all #be kind. Is it wrong too that I especially like the...

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Posted in On the Spectrum

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I like how sparse this is, it

Posted on Sun, 23 Feb 2020

I like how sparse this is, it gives the feeling of nightmare and fear well and benefits from a little freedom from rhyme. :)

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Posted in Nightmares

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This is excellent. A perfect

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

This is excellent. A perfect poem for the picture. Love the use of rot and rancid and putrid, really conjured up the stink of it all. And the picture is amazing too. :)

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Posted in September 15th 2008

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I like the idea of this. I

Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020

I like the idea of this. I like the repetition and I like the stark lines. :) 

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Posted in I've forgotten

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Oh god. Imagine the

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

Oh god. Imagine the disappointment. Just a poem. Not a boob in sight. 

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Posted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven

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