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History

By onemorething on Mon, 17 Feb 2020

Rewrite of something I was happy with then suddenly very unhappy with. I think now this means I'm just confused.

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One Night Stand

By onemorething on Mon, 17 Feb 2020

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Evening Star

By onemorething on Sun, 09 Feb 2020

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Worm Rose

By onemorething on Sat, 08 Feb 2020

I wrote a poem called Shallow Graves once. I have reused the title as I have lost the poem. I don't think it was very cheery. In Sweden, dandelions are called worm roses.

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Well, I have only David

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020

Well, I have only David Attenborough to thank for this one. I saw a segment about bees and electrical signals and then looked it up and read a bit about it. Yes, you're right about smell. I wonder what chemical signals we miss as a result of...

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Lovely memories, Ed, full of

Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020

Lovely memories, Ed, full of sunshine. Love the tile too.

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This is great. You have a

Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020

This is great. You have a brilliant way of writing something so that it makes you smile as well as see the depth of it. I probably haven't explained that very well, but I know what I meant and it is a good thing. Also I'm going to memorise that...

Posted in Minnesota Fats

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Thanks littleditty, am glad

Posted on Fri, 31 Jul 2020

Thanks littleditty, am glad you like my raptor pondering. Yes, just recycling. The buzzards / grouse situation is grotesque, so distressing. Yeah, humans indeed, all the mindlessly cruel stuff that we do is just inexcusable. Thanks for reading it...

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This is very lovely indeed.

Posted on Sat, 25 Jul 2020

This is very lovely indeed.

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I was going to say that it

Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020

I was going to say that it would be good to see the tattoo, but took it from the arm reference in the poem that it might be difficult, the soft arm twist part of the poem was really good too.

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I like the idea of sea walls

Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020

I like the idea of sea walls and shaping the tides connected to the moment, and the anxiety of who knows what the future will hold.

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This made my chest ache in

Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2020

This made my chest ache in recognition. The ache of sadness or guilt for me that I have felt before has something to do with the acceptance part of it, somehow, or acceptance because of a sense of the inescapable, don't know if that makes sense....