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Underground

By onemorething on Mon, 27 Jan 2020

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The Provinces of Sea Swallows

By onemorething on Tue, 21 Jan 2020

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Anthill

By onemorething on Sun, 19 Jan 2020

Morning rewrite of a weirder version of this.

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Lime Tree

By onemorething on Mon, 13 Jan 2020

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This is very lovely indeed.

Posted on Sat, 25 Jul 2020

This is very lovely indeed.

Posted in Stars

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I was going to say that it

Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020

I was going to say that it would be good to see the tattoo, but took it from the arm reference in the poem that it might be difficult, the soft arm twist part of the poem was really good too.

Posted in Soft water, sweet

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I like the idea of sea walls

Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020

I like the idea of sea walls and shaping the tides connected to the moment, and the anxiety of who knows what the future will hold.

Posted in The Moment

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I like this - wondering where

Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2020

I like this - wondering where the breeze has been, what it brings, I like how it encompasses a lot in few words.

Posted in breezy

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What a lovely thing and a

Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2020

What a lovely thing and a lovely poem about it. :)

Posted in "Anna's Blanket"

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I like this. Poor tadpole.

Posted on Thu, 16 Jul 2020

I like this. Poor tadpole. One gulp and you're gone.

Posted in Yikes

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Love the sipping of Western

Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2020

Love the sipping of Western civilisation and the crosshairs of the afternoon. Nicely written exchange before the bell.

Posted in Work Lunchbreak Flash, Alfresco at The Colonial Cafe

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Beautiful, Di. Lovely imagery

Posted on Fri, 10 Jul 2020

Beautiful, Di. Lovely imagery and loved the ant punctuation and lovelorn grasshoppers too.

Posted in 10th july grasshopper

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Oh, it already does. Botres,

Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2020

Oh, it already does. Botres, son of Eumelus tastes some of a ram's brain that was intended as part of an offering to Apollo. Father is enraged, kills son, Apollo, merciful, brings him back to life, but as a bee eater. Just too minor a tale for...

Posted in Bee eaters

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Thank you for making me laugh

Posted on Mon, 29 Jun 2020

Thank you for making me laugh on a Monday, not an easy feat. Rhymes are so nicely done too. Rachel x