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Underground

By onemorething on Mon, 27 Jan 2020

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The Provinces of Sea Swallows

By onemorething on Tue, 21 Jan 2020

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Anthill

By onemorething on Sun, 19 Jan 2020

Morning rewrite of a weirder version of this.

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Lime Tree

By onemorething on Mon, 13 Jan 2020

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This is a very dreamy, misty,

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2020

This is a very dreamy, misty, floaty one, like a Monet painting indeed. Enjoyed the moony wistfulness of it. :)

Posted in the crescent of our strawberry moon

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Every line is beautiful. Love

Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2020

Every line is beautiful. Love this, Di. :)

Posted in june 25th, woods after a hot day

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Very lovely Di, you have

Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2020

Very lovely Di, you have captured all the different moments of a walk so well: wonder, excitement, sadness, light and shade. Rachel :)

Posted in june 20th

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A lot to take in, as

Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2020

A lot to take in, as airyfairy said, but things that stand out straight away - the outsider does not yearn to be tolerated and inclusion is not the same as belonging. Rachel :)

Posted in Outsiders, and the clubhouse door

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I love the bombardment of

Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2020

I love the bombardment of this. Quite a walk. I enjoyed it very much. Has some great lines too, 'the sweat of labour, the sweat of love' just for one. Rachel :)

Posted in This year's walk...(08)

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Love this one, Luigi. So sad

Posted on Thu, 11 Jun 2020

Love this one, Luigi. So sad that he's not here anymore. Like the reflection on mortality. Rachel x

Posted in Independence

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'But forget to grab my heart

Posted on Sat, 13 Jun 2020

'But forget to grab my heart

Leaving it in the living room
Where it fibrillates weakly'

Some wonderful lines in this, I really felt them. Particularly these. Made me sigh. You must go back in and retrieve it. Rachel :)

Posted in Unpicking knots

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I have been back to read this

Posted on Sun, 10 May 2020

I have been back to read this wonderful poem a number of times for the light and shade in its imagery and metaphor, and for how it reads as if it is full of secrets. It is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day. Please do share if you like it...

Posted in Cinderella river

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I love the idea of the wind

Posted on Thu, 04 Jun 2020

I love the idea of the wind as a vagabond of change and the water of goodwill. Some lovely images. Rachel :)

Posted in Gliding Through Woods

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Such beautiful, grief-laden,

Posted on Sat, 30 May 2020

Such beautiful, grief-laden, weighty lines in your poem as well as images. And as well as being very erudite. I know very little about Lacan. I haven't processed the horror of what I think and feel about what happened to George Floyd yet. I found...