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StoryWolf moon onemorething94 years 5 months ago
StoryA collection of words Parson Thru24 years 5 months ago
StoryThe Female of the Species (a ryūka) luigi_pagano174 years 5 months ago
StoryWater-Break-its-Neck, Radnor Forest Rhiannonw84 years 5 months ago
StoryGood intentions Parson Thru44 years 5 months ago
StoryWood Mouse onemorething24 years 5 months ago
StoryTo the belly of an osprey onemorething84 years 5 months ago
StoryWhite noise Parson Thru34 years 5 months ago
StoryReflected Glory luigi_pagano84 years 5 months ago
StoryA Chinese Lantern luigi_pagano124 years 5 months ago
StorySomehow Ewan34 years 5 months ago
StoryPoinsettia Lille Dante24 years 5 months ago
StoryNew Year's Resolution luigi_pagano104 years 5 months ago
StoryGoodbye George MJG44 years 5 months ago
StoryMackerel onemorething54 years 5 months ago
StoryThe bare bones of trees onemorething34 years 5 months ago
StoryDecagon onemorething114 years 5 months ago
StoryThose Were The Days skinner_jennifer114 years 5 months ago
StoryPresent onemorething54 years 5 months ago
StoryChristmas Lunch luigi_pagano104 years 5 months ago
Storyforgive samhennig34 years 5 months ago
Storymiranda Nolan54 years 6 months ago
StoryInternal Organs onemorething44 years 6 months ago
StoryWritten In The Stars skinner_jennifer164 years 6 months ago
StoryBigger Than Your God mickleinapickle64 years 6 months ago

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Cherry

Wood Mouse

Not very festive at all.
Gold cherry

Decagon

Image is from Wikipedia, not wikimedia commons, but I think it's ok as I don't think a shape is owned by anyone.
Cherry

Present

Another day, another wren. However, it is Wren Day so I think I should be forgiven.

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440 of my comments have received 468 Great Feedback votes

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Great. Loved the repetition

Posted on Tue, 12 Nov 2019

Great. Loved the repetition of super noodles too, made me laugh, but lots of sadnesses in this too. :) 

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Posted in Shrinkage

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Love how this moves from the

Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2019

Love how this moves from the everyday to magical to devastating. :)

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Posted in layers

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I really like the matter-of

Posted on Mon, 04 Nov 2019

I really like the matter-of-factness of this when you can sense the depth beneath the words. I think it's a clever and affecting poem. :)

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Posted in Trying to Remember What It Was Like

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As mentioned above, I like

Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2019

As mentioned above, I like how you've woven the details and stresses of moving and sadnesses with the initial shocks in the house and bonfire night. Glad it had a happy ending. :)

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Posted in New Beginnings

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I like that you have included

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019

I like that you have included that we don't require them to have permits and welcome them. If only we could apply this to all migrants. I love birds so enjoyed your visiting geese. :)

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Posted in Geese

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Your poems are always so

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019

Your poems are always so sensory. 

'a dashing sky scatter

of black stars swirl' 

'rain-sound wings'

Very lovely. :)

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Posted in starlings

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Great observations and

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

Great observations and cleverly written with humour and pathos. Black leather waistcoat, oof, no. Enjoyed reading. :)

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Posted in With a Blue Jug in Her Hand

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Another lovely

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

Another lovely autobiographical piece to read. I love how you sequentially share all the important details that gently reveal the twists and turns of what happened both in terms of events and how you felt, it makes these so interesting and...

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Posted in The Last Man in my Life

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Ha. CZJ shops in Asda not

Posted on Mon, 21 Oct 2019

Ha. CZJ shops in Asda not Morrison's. That'll be why. 

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Posted in Last Mango in Morrison's

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This is brilliant. 

Posted on Thu, 24 Oct 2019

This is brilliant. 

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Posted in Birthday Song

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