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Story | In Loving Memory | luigi_pagano | 6 | 4 years 5 months ago |
Story | Safe Journey Blackbird | skinner_jennifer | 10 | 4 years 5 months ago |
Story | Trying to Remember What It Was Like | JamesF | 2 | 4 years 5 months ago |
Story | Learn to Lose | jennifer | 3 | 4 years 5 months ago |
Story | For Bob | Mark Burrow | 11 | 4 years 5 months ago |
Story | Soldier's Spirit | skinner_jennifer | 10 | 4 years 5 months ago |
Story | Tick, tock | Parson Thru | 4 | 4 years 5 months ago |
Story | Tree from a window | onemorething | 10 | 4 years 5 months ago |
Story | Winter's Charm | skinner_jennifer | 6 | 4 years 5 months ago |
Story | DON'T TEMPT FATE! | skinner_jennifer | 17 | 4 years 5 months ago |
Story | The Chair Problem | The Other Terre... | 11 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Tins of things | mcmanaman | 5 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Then and Now | Starfish Girl | 6 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Wood Anemones | onemorething | 17 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Uncertainties | skinner_jennifer | 9 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Last Mango in Morrison's | Ewan | 3 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Black Herons | onemorething | 12 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Hares | onemorething | 8 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Autumn’s Iron | onemorething | 8 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Parlez-vous français? | luigi_pagano | 6 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Al in Minneapolis | jeand | 9 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Birthday Song | Kilb50 | 3 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Gym Shorts and Sneakers 1963 | hudsonmoon | 13 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Double Helix | maudsy | 1 | 4 years 6 months ago |
Story | Strange Light | Jane Hyphen | 8 | 4 years 6 months ago |
I like the ideas, the use of
Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019
I like the ideas, the use of speech and the effort of your rhymes. You hint at the father being difficult, ‘taunting’, but don’t reveal enough perhaps here for me? I guess I think you could base it more on this? What are you trying to tell / say...
Read full commentPosted in the zoo
These are very sweet and nice
Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2019
These are very sweet and nice to hear you reading them. You have captured childish states well with these, I think. :)
Read full commentPosted in KidsSpeak
This is a lovely, delicate
Posted on Thu, 15 Aug 2019
This is a lovely, delicate poem. Like a leaf of a poem actually with its hint of darkness too. I loved, ‘breathe leaf breath’ and the threatening wind.
Read full commentPosted in airmail from the amazon (august 2018)
This is very lovely. I like
Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2019
This is very lovely. I like your use of emphasis, but all wonderful.
Read full commentPosted in prairie river flowing
Rhiannon, these are so good.
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2019
Rhiannon, these are so good. I have been popping back to read them in turn. Though I enjoyed hearing your Welsh accent too - which is poetic in itself, I think. April and December are my favourites - perhaps for what they describe as much as your...
Read full commentPosted in Through the year month by month
Such an interesting piece of
Posted on Tue, 13 Aug 2019
Such an interesting piece of writing about memory. Enjoyed it very much. Made me think of synapses as light or stars. Lovely.
Read full commentPosted in Remembering
Aha, so this is the lost ID
Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2019
Aha, so this is the lost ID poem! It's very good indeed and as Rhiannon says above, neatly done. Also I missed passports on my long list of things that would have my name on! (I might edit to see if I can squeeze passports in!) I remember this...
Read full commentPosted in Stateless in New York
So lovely. Some very
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
So lovely. Some very beautiful lines.
Read full commentPosted in grass/july
Thanks David. Just the
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
Thanks David. Just the thought of Boris Johnson gives me a shudder. It would be nice to think though, wouldn’t it, that we could all embrace more of our humanity. Thanks for reading my poem and leaving such a thoughtful comment.
Posted in I am not a statistic
This has so many sublime
Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2019
This has so many sublime lines, imagery and metaphor. Such an excellent piece of writing.
Read full commentPosted in A Man Riding the Tube Train
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