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Cathedrals

By onemorething on Mon, 12 Aug 2019

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Classification of Moths

By onemorething on Thu, 08 Aug 2019

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Tentacled Lagoon Worm

By onemorething on Wed, 07 Aug 2019

Photo of Avon Estuary from Wikimedia Commons: https://commons.m.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Avon_estuary_-_geograph.org.uk_-_1509944.jpg

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Six Plumed Bird of Paradise

By onemorething on Sun, 04 Aug 2019

Image courtesy of Luigi from wikimedia commons, licence in comments. And evidence that some hype is lived up to. Maybe.

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I liked it the first time

Posted on Thu, 02 Jan 2020

I liked it the first time around as well as this version. Is the last word different now? That first stanza, in particular, is beautiful. :)

Posted in comfort and joy (another go at this)

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Thank you! It was a bit of an

Posted on Sat, 28 Dec 2019

Thank you! It was a bit of an odd take on the IP, and found myself unable to strong-arm a wren into this either. :)

Posted in Decagon

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Wonderful poem full of

Posted on Fri, 20 Dec 2019

Wonderful poem full of startling images. :)

Posted in woods, late

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Love how this moves from the

Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2019

Love how this moves from the everyday to magical to devastating. :)

Posted in layers

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I really like the matter-of

Posted on Mon, 04 Nov 2019

I really like the matter-of-factness of this when you can sense the depth beneath the words. I think it's a clever and affecting poem. :)

Posted in Trying to Remember What It Was Like

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As mentioned above, I like

Posted on Tue, 05 Nov 2019

As mentioned above, I like how you've woven the details and stresses of moving and sadnesses with the initial shocks in the house and bonfire night. Glad it had a happy ending. :)

Posted in New Beginnings

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I like that you have included

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019

I like that you have included that we don't require them to have permits and welcome them. If only we could apply this to all migrants. I love birds so enjoyed your visiting geese. :)

Posted in Geese

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Your poems are always so

Posted on Thu, 31 Oct 2019

Your poems are always so sensory.

'a dashing sky scatter

of black stars swirl'

'rain-sound wings'

Very lovely. :)

Posted in starlings

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Great observations and

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

Great observations and cleverly written with humour and pathos. Black leather waistcoat, oof, no. Enjoyed reading. :)

Posted in With a Blue Jug in Her Hand

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Another lovely

Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2019

Another lovely autobiographical piece to read. I love how you sequentially share all the important details that gently reveal the twists and turns of what happened both in terms of events and how you felt, it makes these so interesting and...