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Rubatosis

Another one from the Dictionary of Obscure Sorrows. Sorry, I couldn’t help it, hopefully I’ll settle down!
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This is unsettling to me and

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

This is unsettling to me and comforting at the same time. So well captured. 

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Posted in Strange Light

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Amazing poem. :)

Posted on Thu, 03 Oct 2019

Amazing poem. :)

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Posted in American Diaspora

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So beautiful. I love this. '

Posted on Tue, 24 Sep 2019

So beautiful. I love this. ' swollen seconds full of sun.' and ' joined dots, clotting to a mass of dark.' Inspired lines. Very clever idea too of them as full stops. 

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Posted in recipe

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Breath-taking imagery. Quite

Posted on Sun, 15 Sep 2019

Breath-taking imagery. Quite stunning. :)

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Posted in wings, late summer

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Lovely, really like the

Posted on Thu, 29 Aug 2019

Lovely, really like the cyclical element to this. Owls are magnificent. :)

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Posted in With Obsidian Eyes

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Jenny, I love your jellyfish

Posted on Thu, 22 Aug 2019

Jenny, I love your jellyfish - terrifying! Your description of it is beautifully done ‘ghostly, Seraph angel’ and works well with the story. They are such alien creatures. I guess we can both thank the jellyfish for being such weird and wonderful...

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Posted in Strange Happenings

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This is a great poem, so many

Posted on Wed, 21 Aug 2019

This is a great poem, so many brilliant lines, loved, ‘vertigo gives fear to stumble’ amongst pretty much all the rest. :)

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Posted in Sweet Thing

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This is really good. I think

Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019

This is really good. I think it encapsulates the issues / dilemmas of antidepressants really well for those who take them. I like how you’ve managed to include the routine submission to taking them too. It’s a sad poem, but an experience that is...

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Posted in anti depressants

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I like the ideas, the use of

Posted on Tue, 20 Aug 2019

I like the ideas, the use of speech and the effort of your rhymes. You hint at the father being difficult, ‘taunting’, but don’t reveal enough perhaps here for me? I guess I think you could base it more on this? What are you trying to tell / say...

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Posted in the zoo

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These are very sweet and nice

Posted on Mon, 19 Aug 2019

These are very sweet and nice to hear you reading them. You have captured childish states well with these, I think. :)

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