A fox, an owl and a caterpillar.

By D Marie

Mon, 19 Aug 2019
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Your tail is a trick

a finely tuned instrument

wafting out of sight.

 

 

Blessed with silent flight

seizing life with taloned grip

secret as the night.

 

 

Green caterpillar

the size of a pine needle

bridged between two leaves.

 

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Comments

Submitted by onemorething on

I like these. The fox one is very lovely indeed based on its tail. What about just ‘bridge’ re the caterpillar if you’re not sure about ‘bridged’? :)

 

Submitted by D Marie on

Bridge is better, makes it more visual. Thanks onemorething.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I liked them too. Bridged seems one syllable, but bridge does read more easily anyway. Rhiannon