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Gila Woodpecker

By onemorething on Tue, 18 Feb 2020

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History

By onemorething on Mon, 17 Feb 2020

Rewrite of something I was happy with then suddenly very unhappy with. I think now this means I'm just confused.

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One Night Stand

By onemorething on Mon, 17 Feb 2020

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Evening Star

By onemorething on Sun, 09 Feb 2020

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439 of my comments have received 467 Great Feedback votes

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Oh thanks for the link, hadn

Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2020

Oh thanks for the link, hadn't read it, this is a great poem, love 'men manufacture both machine and soul' and yes, moving towards, those last few lines. Maybe even in the absence of absolutes we should all have a rest. Made me think of lockdown...

Posted in Walking Away

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Thanks Drew, congratulations

Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020

Thanks Drew, congratulations to you too, very well deserved for your fantastic story. :)

Posted in Deimos

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Wonderful Di, I love how this

Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2020

Wonderful Di, I love how this ripples and rumbles to your hope at the end. Love the fanfares of dock leaves from dark mud, love all of it. :)

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Ha. Oh dear! Not very

Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020

Ha. Oh dear! Not very lucrative afterall. It definitely is skillful to tell a story in just a few words, especially only 50. I would never manage, for one thing, I use far too many words to say anything at all and I'm a word hoarder too, I'd...

Posted in Three is a Crowd

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Oh good, it sounds like you

Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2020

Oh good, it sounds like you managed to get a longer sleep at last and ate a meal. Yes, I hope that people don't forget about all of the lessons they might have learnt when this passes too. And of course, you are in everyone's thoughts, you are so...

Posted in First Cut

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This is excellent and amusing

Posted on Wed, 18 Mar 2020

This is excellent and amusing . I think we need as much amusement as we can get at the moment. Rachel x

Posted in Blood Relations

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Thank you. Am very happy that

Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2020

Thank you. Am very happy that you liked it. No, you haven't, but you appear to be giving that a try now and I have buckled, so here you go. I find this mildly terrifying so I might hastily delete and retreat, and am not sure my dulcet tones are...

Posted in Meditation

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I think you should get on

Posted on Thu, 12 Mar 2020

I think you should get on with it then seeing as there are members of the paying public waiting. Ok. We're not paying, but we are waiting and I'm sure that counts for something. :)

Posted in Sven Goes to War. Part 1. Warriors of the Wasteland

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I think this is wonderful. :)

Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2020

I think this is wonderful. :)

Posted in Imagine if we Didn't Feel Pain

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I like the fact that it's

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

I like the fact that it's clear that it is you doing all the watching by the end of the poem.