Beams of light quiver through Summer leaves lulling a Sunday afternoon into stolen moments, I surrender to the peace diverted only by the soft cooing...
Hi Penny, you're doing such a fantastic job at keeping this story going. I love that Perfidia has now got a familiar, I think Chaos adds such an intriguing part to the story, and the magic you are creating is purrfect! Please excuse the pun......
Wonderful writing Paul, you've really captured the imagination of your journey into this story. It comes across as if you got as much pleasure writing, as I did reading.
I don't have Netflix, so have never seen those films you mentioned, ...
What an amazing experience to have been through. The challenge of staying awake when you're tired would have been far too much for me, so I really admire your courage.
Wow! Great creepy story
Posted on Mon, 10 Oct 2022
Wow! Great creepy story telling, and I didn't see that ending coming, which gave me the chills.
Thanks for sharing.
Jenny.
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Descriptive poem of the cycle
Posted on Tue, 11 Oct 2022
Descriptive poem of the cycle of life in nature, a special poem indeed Rhiannon.
Jenny.
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So there's more to that dog
Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
So there's more to that dog collar than meets the eye. Wonder where the story will go next!
You really are on top form keeping two stories going Penny.
Jenny.
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Hi Penny, you're doing such a
Posted on Sat, 08 Oct 2022
Hi Penny, you're doing such a fantastic job at keeping this story going. I love that Perfidia has now got a familiar, I think Chaos adds such an intriguing part to the story, and the magic you are creating is purrfect! Please excuse the pun......
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Wonderful writing Paul, you
Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
Wonderful writing Paul, you've really captured the imagination of your journey into this story. It comes across as if you got as much pleasure writing, as I did reading.
I don't have Netflix, so have never seen those films you mentioned, ...
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Six of Six)
I hope you manage to get that
Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
I hope you manage to get that tooth sorted out properly Jean, especially when ulcers are a problem too.
Take care.
Jenny.
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Wow! This is a real page
Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022
Wow! This is a real page turner, and you've left the reader on such a cliff hanger. Now I'm on the edge of my seat to find out more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Five of Six)
What an amazing experience to
Posted on Thu, 06 Oct 2022
What an amazing experience to have been through. The challenge of staying awake when you're tired would have been far too much for me, so I really admire your courage.
Great story.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The .......zzz ZZZ Part Four.
It must be so confusing not
Posted on Thu, 06 Oct 2022
It must be so confusing not knowing what time or day it is. I'm onto next part to find out more.
Jenny.
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Hi Rhiannon, I have to admit
Posted on Tue, 04 Oct 2022
Hi Rhiannon, I have to admit they do look like marsh-mallow treats, what a great description. Their beauty shines through in your poem.
Jenny.
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