Jacob stood numb with shock, the news hit him like a bombshell. He wondered how this woman could possibly be his Mum. The chain of events that led up...
Love is more precious than anything else in life. The bonds of a loving family is what really matters. I hope you continue to find the light and get through all your hardships.
Hi Penny, I imagine the hurrican that struck Forida was bad and those last 10 lines describe sadly what happened. I hope you were okay and not hit too badly. Having been on holiday on Florida's coast, I know what those strong winds can be like......
I really hope you get this story published Paul, it's got such a fantastic pace, and there's no end as to where Billy's adventures could take him. It's truely magical and holds the key to your great imagination. Really enjoying, and thank you so...
What a captivating scene for the season you've described in this poem Di. It was so refreshing to read. It certainly rinsed out any sluggish thoughts I've had, and now I'm desperate to get out and feel the wind on my face.
I hope nobody becomes ill, a week is such a long time to stay awake. I recall there was a programme on tv where people competed to see who could stay awake the longest, but I can't remember who won, or how long they managed without sleep.
This was such an amusing
Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022
This was such an amusing piece of writing Jane, put a big smile on my face.
...
Read full commentPosted in A Real Doctor
Love is more precious than
Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022
Love is more precious than anything else in life. The bonds of a loving family is what really matters. I hope you continue to find the light and get through all your hardships.
Take care.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Buried Treasure
Hi Penny, I imagine the
Posted on Sat, 01 Oct 2022
Hi Penny, I imagine the hurrican that struck Forida was bad and those last 10 lines describe sadly what happened. I hope you were okay and not hit too badly. Having been on holiday on Florida's coast, I know what those strong winds can be like......
Read full commentPosted in "Anemoi" (wind gods- mythology)
I really hope you get this
Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022
I really hope you get this story published Paul, it's got such a fantastic pace, and there's no end as to where Billy's adventures could take him. It's truely magical and holds the key to your great imagination. Really enjoying, and thank you so...
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Four of Six)
What a captivating scene for
Posted on Sat, 01 Oct 2022
What a captivating scene for the season you've described in this poem Di. It was so refreshing to read. It certainly rinsed out any sluggish thoughts I've had, and now I'm desperate to get out and feel the wind on my face.
Thank you for...
Read full commentPosted in high seas
I hope nobody becomes ill, a
Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022
I hope nobody becomes ill, a week is such a long time to stay awake. I recall there was a programme on tv where people competed to see who could stay awake the longest, but I can't remember who won, or how long they managed without sleep.
...
Read full commentPosted in The .......Part Two
I really liked this poem
Posted on Thu, 29 Sep 2022
I really liked this poem about glass, you put it together so well with great rhythm and rhyme.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in A Tribute To Glass
I like the many descriptions
Posted on Thu, 29 Sep 2022
I like the many descriptions in this nature poem Rhiannon, from the:
spikey case around soft mattress
cushioning the conker's fall
shining polished horse-chestnut ball
copper gloss that brightens up a child's gaze of...
Read full commentPosted in Shiny treasure
Oooo! This story is so
Posted on Tue, 27 Sep 2022
Oooo! This story is so exciting Paul, right up my street and perfect for the season. I'm on the edge of my seat to find out more.
Well deserved of Pick of the day...congratulations from me.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Three of Six)
Each line of your poem was a
Posted on Tue, 27 Sep 2022
Each line of your poem was a celebration of the season's harvest Rhiannon. I thought it was perfect.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Herefordshire Harvest
Pages