Hi there Maxine, when I first read this, I was enjoying but didn't understand the ending. Now you've explained there's a part two, I'm looking forward to finding out whether she can survive the competition.
I wish I could be a skilful reader like Di, she's always committed to getting deeply into the heart of poems. I felt quite spiritual reading your poem, it was like an out of body experience, a nomad forever searching. Maybe a deep...
It's great to hear from you Mark. I just love the changing colours of autumn, it's like a bohemian haven for me and very comforting. I think we certainly need nature in this ever changing world we live in, and I just so appreciate it when someone...
I know exactly how you feel about it still feeling like summer outside, though I can feel that change coming, and for me it's such a special time of the year, when the food that's grown in the garden is ready to be picked and...
Nothing ceases to amaze me about the future, and your imaginative story is inspiring, though scary too. Funnily enough I do believe we have lost the ability to mind read, but think in the future it may be taught in schools...well you never know...
I was so saddened to read
Posted on Mon, 26 Sep 2022
I was so saddened to read this, it's every parents nightmare and should never have happened.
Hope comfort can be found.
Jenny.
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Hi there Maxine, when I first
Posted on Sat, 24 Sep 2022
Hi there Maxine, when I first read this, I was enjoying but didn't understand the ending. Now you've explained there's a part two, I'm looking forward to finding out whether she can survive the competition.
Jenny.
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Such a beguiling poem Rachel.
Posted on Sun, 25 Sep 2022
Such a beguiling poem Rachel. Your voice is spellbinding and so calming.
Jenny.
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Love this poem about the rain
Posted on Fri, 23 Sep 2022
Love this poem about the rain Rhiannon. Like the idea of it being like a lullaby too. Each lines flow perfectly into the next.
Jenny.
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Hi Jane,
Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022
Hi Jane,
I wish I could be a skilful reader like Di, she's always committed to getting deeply into the heart of poems. I felt quite spiritual reading your poem, it was like an out of body experience, a nomad forever searching. Maybe a deep...
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It's great to hear from you
Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022
It's great to hear from you Mark. I just love the changing colours of autumn, it's like a bohemian haven for me and very comforting. I think we certainly need nature in this ever changing world we live in, and I just so appreciate it when someone...
Read full commentPosted in In Lucid Dreams
Hi Jane,
Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022
Hi Jane,
I know exactly how you feel about it still feeling like summer outside, though I can feel that change coming, and for me it's such a special time of the year, when the food that's grown in the garden is ready to be picked and...
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what do you do when you read
Posted on Wed, 21 Sep 2022
what do you do when you read the unexpected? You go with it. That's exactly what I'm doing.
Great read. Looking forward to more.
Jenny.
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Nothing ceases to amaze me
Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022
Nothing ceases to amaze me about the future, and your imaginative story is inspiring, though scary too. Funnily enough I do believe we have lost the ability to mind read, but think in the future it may be taught in schools...well you never know...
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With all the trauma you've
Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022
With all the trauma you've still managed to keep a sense of humour which is incredible Jean.
Let's hope Effie gives you a break and behaves.
Take care.
Jenny.
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