Solitary Mother gazes out across grim terrain, a landmark languishing; tolerance no longer abiding, exhausted she's perplexed... as midday sun rages...
I go to a place where sun dips its beams onto surface of ocean water, creating ripples of light, while all around there's an audible sound of pebbles...
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Good luck with your original
Posted on Sat, 13 Aug 2022
Good luck with your original record player. There's nothing like listening to vinyl, especially on a vintage player. I bought a portable record player a year ago, and love listening to the old singles I've collected from the 1960s and 70s, even...
you know we never had bank cards back then, so the cash you had would have to last. We lived on blackberries and mushrooms, but I recall we enjoyed bread rolls in St Ives, and on the way home we had a bag of chips each which was a real luxury......
I can't help but feel sickened at the destruction of so many trees. My stomach turns over at how some humans have such a disregard for the feelings of nature. Reminds me of the brutality inflicted on the rain forest.
'It's more than idle chirping going on.' Um! I wonder what the crows were converging to discuss? I think Martha and Perfidia are going to be suspicious of all these birds...I know I would be.
Good luck with your original
Posted on Sat, 13 Aug 2022
Good luck with your original record player. There's nothing like listening to vinyl, especially on a vintage player. I bought a portable record player a year ago, and love listening to the old singles I've collected from the 1960s and 70s, even...
Read full commentPosted in Antique Record Changer
Great descriptive read Paul,
Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022
Great descriptive read Paul, and I didn't see that ending coming. Looking forward to reading more.
Jenny.
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Hi Penny,
Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022
Your story parts always end with a gripping mystery...a real page turner, that makes me want to keep on reading.
I also agree with the above comments about being able to write two stories at the same time, it takes a real imaginative...
Read full commentPosted in "The Coffee House Spy" 4
Hi Rachel,
Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022
An unusual poem that is most mysterious and curious. It makes me think of a symbolic diary entry known only to the Witch herself.
I love the picture too.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Witch’s Daughter
Hello Di,
Posted on Tue, 09 Aug 2022
you know we never had bank cards back then, so the cash you had would have to last. We lived on blackberries and mushrooms, but I recall we enjoyed bread rolls in St Ives, and on the way home we had a bag of chips each which was a real luxury......
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I can't help but feel
Posted on Tue, 09 Aug 2022
I can't help but feel sickened at the destruction of so many trees. My stomach turns over at how some humans have such a disregard for the feelings of nature. Reminds me of the brutality inflicted on the rain forest.
You've made a very...
Read full commentPosted in logging evidence of us
Such warm sentiments like the
Posted on Tue, 09 Aug 2022
Such warm sentiments like the ones in your poem, should be treasured forever.
A respectful heirloom indeed Rhiannon.
Jenny.
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'It's more than idle chirping
Posted on Sun, 07 Aug 2022
'It's more than idle chirping going on.' Um! I wonder what the crows were converging to discuss? I think Martha and Perfidia are going to be suspicious of all these birds...I know I would be.
I do hope Willow's okay.
Still really...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 3
A Bright and beautiful poem
Posted on Mon, 08 Aug 2022
A Bright and beautiful poem Richard.
I liked this one a lot.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Glorious Moments
Special memories never fade,
Posted on Sun, 07 Aug 2022
Special memories never fade, they should always live on in our hearts, and just sometimes we have a chance to share them. A short but meaningful poem.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in memory
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