I caught the bus and returned to the house, full of my excitement at now having a son who could feed properly, just wanting to let the world know how...
I awoke that morning with all the agony and torment dispersed after a good night's sleep. My new companion even made a cup of tea and bought it to me...
I wondered what happened to your poem. I'm glad to see it back. You've inspired me to write about a recollection from my teenage years, so many memories I have from that time.
Some strange behaviour from this mystery man. Reading your story there's a treasure trove of cuious characters being created. And who or what is lurking in the shadows? I ask myself.
I know exactly how you feel. I always bought my bras from Debenhams, because the sales women were so helpful, no matter what size you were. Now Debenhams have closed down where I live, I find it impossible to get a decent bra, they all are either...
You've written an illustrative poem that describes this lively competetive Goosegrass. I didn't know it flowered, so you've taught me something new Rhiannon.
Very astute poem, I like the
Posted on Wed, 03 Aug 2022
Very astute poem, I like the metaphor of the sea engulfing you in foamy kisses, and then letting you go back on dry land.
Jenny.
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Hi Paul,
Posted on Tue, 02 Aug 2022
Hi Paul,
I wondered what happened to your poem. I'm glad to see it back. You've inspired me to write about a recollection from my teenage years, so many memories I have from that time.
I did like the lines:-
Moonlit, midnight...
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Oh dear, it looks like there
Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2022
Oh dear, it looks like there's more trouble brewing for Martha and Perfidia.
Glad to see you've started a new series on this story.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 1
Some strange behaviour from
Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2022
Some strange behaviour from this mystery man. Reading your story there's a treasure trove of cuious characters being created. And who or what is lurking in the shadows? I ask myself.
Oh! By the way, what is a Moniker?
Looking...
Read full commentPosted in "The Coffee House Spy" 3
Another action packed
Posted on Sun, 31 Jul 2022
Another action packed dramatic story.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Do you ever wish you could turn back time?
I know exactly how you feel.
Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2022
I know exactly how you feel. I always bought my bras from Debenhams, because the sales women were so helpful, no matter what size you were. Now Debenhams have closed down where I live, I find it impossible to get a decent bra, they all are either...
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Hi there,
Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022
I have no idea why you don't get cherries. Perhaps get in contact with insert, she might be able to help.
Your writing is very prolific. Perhaps slow down and try reading other peoples work on here, it does help to get you noticed more....
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A tense drama indeed, but
Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022
A tense drama indeed, but thankfully with a happy ending for those girls that survived.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The game of life
This poem bought back
Posted on Thu, 28 Jul 2022
This poem bought back memories of when I saw Bambi. You describe well the little fawns innocence.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in From Here to There
You've written an
Posted on Thu, 28 Jul 2022
You've written an illustrative poem that describes this lively competetive Goosegrass. I didn't know it flowered, so you've taught me something new Rhiannon.
Thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Competition
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