As Autumn turns to Winter's chill, forest hunger draws us where fallen dead leaves scrunch beneath boots. Whispered breath of timid deer in brushwood...
Remembering that sense of mystery, recalling woodland swathed in wild childhood memory; amid flowing passage of time, wondering if trill congregation...
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Your poem is a jewel to
Posted on Sun, 22 Jun 2025
Your poem is a jewel to treasure Frances. It reminded me of my own early days back in the early 60s, I used to go through my late mum's jewel box with her necklesses, brooches and bracelets. I still have some of her jewels to this day, which I...
You know my opinion on technology Harry. The phone I've just got, sits on my desk unused, apart from some much needed important phone numbers that my partner's son put on for me.
The kind lady in the Vodaphone shop put me on facebook, but...
I love your description of my poem:- 'It reads like a composted memory.'..that is so apt and a much valued comment. Living in the moment gives reason to look back at old photos and recapture them in words, it's something I have...
Just spent a couple of hours reading this story Harry. So glad I went back to Dead Man 1. It's extremely atmospheric and the narrative really captures John's feelings as he goes about his business.
the daring Siamese cat must have been very brave to chase the fox. This is the kind of situation that probably will never be seen again. It's a great poem and you've captured the moment perfectly.
Hi Maxine, I read your piece with interest. Retiring for me was the best tonic being a home lover. Back in the middle 1990s and into early 2001, I worked nights in a factory, also ran a house on my own, and did three cleaning jobs too. I was like...
Hi Paul, I've got some great memories of that garden. We had an old air raid shelter at the bottom, I used to store all my garden stuff in there, it was like a small den. There were two parts each side of the path, one side was for flowers and...
I was absorbed by the pensive thoughts. I've often wondered what it must be like to have been a twin and that connection that cannot be disconnected, no matter what.
There's an awareness of understanding in your writing Jane.
Your poem is a jewel to
Posted on Sun, 22 Jun 2025
Your poem is a jewel to treasure Frances. It reminded me of my own early days back in the early 60s, I used to go through my late mum's jewel box with her necklesses, brooches and bracelets. I still have some of her jewels to this day, which I...
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I can just see the expression
Posted on Sat, 21 Jun 2025
I can just see the expression on Gwladys face, poor woman never gets a moment to herself. Though It was so amusing to read.
Fun to read as always Phil.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Answer (Episode 14 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))
You know my opinion on
Posted on Fri, 20 Jun 2025
You know my opinion on technology Harry. The phone I've just got, sits on my desk unused, apart from some much needed important phone numbers that my partner's son put on for me.
The kind lady in the Vodaphone shop put me on facebook, but...
Read full commentPosted in The Erosion of Choice
Hi Jess,
Posted on Tue, 17 Jun 2025
Hi Jess,
I love your description of my poem:- 'It reads like a composted memory.'..that is so apt and a much valued comment. Living in the moment gives reason to look back at old photos and recapture them in words, it's something I have...
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Just spent a couple of hours
Posted on Mon, 16 Jun 2025
Just spent a couple of hours reading this story Harry. So glad I went back to Dead Man 1. It's extremely atmospheric and the narrative really captures John's feelings as he goes about his business.
Fascinated on how you've created such...
Read full commentPosted in Dead Man: 5
Hi Paul,
Posted on Thu, 19 Jun 2025
Hi Paul,
the daring Siamese cat must have been very brave to chase the fox. This is the kind of situation that probably will never be seen again. It's a great poem and you've captured the moment perfectly.
Like Rhiannon said, if you...
Read full commentPosted in The Fox and the Siamese
Hi Maxine, I read your piece
Posted on Tue, 17 Jun 2025
Hi Maxine, I read your piece with interest. Retiring for me was the best tonic being a home lover. Back in the middle 1990s and into early 2001, I worked nights in a factory, also ran a house on my own, and did three cleaning jobs too. I was like...
Read full commentPosted in Equal.
Hi Paul, I've got some great
Posted on Tue, 17 Jun 2025
Hi Paul, I've got some great memories of that garden. We had an old air raid shelter at the bottom, I used to store all my garden stuff in there, it was like a small den. There were two parts each side of the path, one side was for flowers and...
Read full commentPosted in When Time Has Elapsed
So there really was a Sarah..
Posted on Sun, 15 Jun 2025
So there really was a Sarah...the plot thickens.
Keep going Phil, I'm curious to know more....
Read full commentPosted in Clue (Episode 13 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))
I was absorbed by the pensive
Posted on Thu, 12 Jun 2025
I was absorbed by the pensive thoughts. I've often wondered what it must be like to have been a twin and that connection that cannot be disconnected, no matter what.
There's an awareness of understanding in your writing Jane.
Jenny...
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part One (b)
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