I wonder! Did Mary Kelynack's strength come from the briny? For as weary flow of watchful tide fishing boats did arrive, then waves bringing ravenous...
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Now I wonder who Dolly is! Um
Posted on Sun, 31 Aug 2025
Now I wonder who Dolly is! Um! The plot thickens once more. I've got a worrying feeling about the young Arry...hope he doesn't divulge the existence of John Thomas.
you know there's so many great writers on abc tales. Since I've been on here I've seen so many talants come and go. I'm in awe of each and everyone of them, including youtself.
I think we all get a feeling of not being able to write at times, it's human nature. I just wanted to reassure myself and others, that it's about never giving up.
Thank you for the cherries Editors, they're much appreciated.
This is such an enjoyable read. Mary does seem to express many charismatic qualities. I can understand why you appreciated her company. I loved the magpie in her too, it reminded me of myself when younger, not so much these days now I'm getting...
It sounds like a midnight to sunrise party's a great idea. I hope Jon does come back for Perfdia, felt so sorry for the poor woman remembering the loss of her father.
I loved the idea of the veil, it adds a touch of magic and mystery to your story Paul. It also feels like he's between two worlds. I'm eager to read more, as I'm fascinated by the boy sittting on the outer ridge.
Now I wonder who Dolly is! Um
Posted on Sun, 31 Aug 2025
Now I wonder who Dolly is! Um! The plot thickens once more. I've got a worrying feeling about the young Arry...hope he doesn't divulge the existence of John Thomas.
Keep going Phil.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Valued (Episode 23 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))
You highligt such incredible
Posted on Wed, 27 Aug 2025
You highligt such incredible discoveries here in your poem Rhiannon. So much life that shows just how amazing the deep oceans really are.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in From the Chinese Bathyscaphe, Striver
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025
Hi Turlough,
you know there's so many great writers on abc tales. Since I've been on here I've seen so many talants come and go. I'm in awe of each and everyone of them, including youtself.
I'm glad you comprehend my poem and the...
Read full commentPosted in When All Seems Lost
Your lovely comment was a
Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025
Your lovely comment was a genuine pleasure to receive Ross. I really hope inspiration flows from your pen in torrents.
Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts.
You have a great week too.
Jenny.
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I think we all get a feeling
Posted on Mon, 25 Aug 2025
I think we all get a feeling of not being able to write at times, it's human nature. I just wanted to reassure myself and others, that it's about never giving up.
Thank you for the cherries Editors, they're much appreciated.
Jenny...
Read full commentPosted in When All Seems Lost
I'm truly into your story,
Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025
I'm truly into your story, now wondering what mode of transport Thomas has in mind for the next part of their escape.
Gripping read as always Penny.
Jenny.
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Constable John isn't as green
Posted on Sun, 24 Aug 2025
Constable John isn't as green as he sounds, at least he would have had the sense to insist on looking upstairs.
So many stories unfolding...what with the skelington in the back yard, and now harbouring a criminal.
You're really...
Read full commentPosted in Denied (Episode 22 - The Further Chronicles of a Young Lady (and her Maid))
This is such an enjoyable
Posted on Thu, 21 Aug 2025
This is such an enjoyable read. Mary does seem to express many charismatic qualities. I can understand why you appreciated her company. I loved the magpie in her too, it reminded me of myself when younger, not so much these days now I'm getting...
Read full commentPosted in Mary's Missing Teapot
It sounds like a midnight to
Posted on Sat, 16 Aug 2025
It sounds like a midnight to sunrise party's a great idea. I hope Jon does come back for Perfdia, felt so sorry for the poor woman remembering the loss of her father.
Looking forward to next part.
Jenny.
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I loved the idea of the veil,
Posted on Tue, 19 Aug 2025
I loved the idea of the veil, it adds a touch of magic and mystery to your story Paul. It also feels like he's between two worlds. I'm eager to read more, as I'm fascinated by the boy sittting on the outer ridge.
Some haunting moments amid...
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