This is so beautiful Di, it made me feel all fuzzy and warm inside. I can't pick out a line or stanza, because the whole poem is just a perfect representation of the coming spring.
you know I think Shakespeare was right when he said:- "If music be the food of love, play on give me excess of it." Most of my life has been filled with musical memories and I don't know where I would have been without them....
Your understanding of the
Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2020
Your understanding of the concept in this poem is excellent.
Jenny.
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Creative metaphors have
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2020
Creative metaphors have inspired me lately and I love the ideas in this poem.
Jenny.
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Such a sad read and one that
Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2020
Such a sad read and one that will resonate with so many who have lost loved ones.
I hope the family get through this period and time will heal their hearts.
Jenny.
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This is a wonderful read,
Posted on Sun, 09 Feb 2020
This is a wonderful read, because it gave me a smile. I love the bit about them making up rap songs, reminds me of my partners grandchildren.
I have to admit to relating to the bit about only having showers and longing for a bath. We had...
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Hi onemorething,
Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2020
Hi onemorething,
I know what you mean about the wind and rain howling outside, it makes being indoors feel so cozy on a Sunday, just glad I don't have to go out.
It's good to know you can identify with what I'm writing. I remember...
Read full commentPosted in To February With Love
Like the dandilion this is a
Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2020
Like the dandilion this is a strong surviving poem that will linger in the readers mind when summer comes around.
Dandilions are extremely useful little flowers with their leaves that can be eaten, the flowers attract so many insects. ...
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Hi Penny,
Posted on Mon, 03 Feb 2020
Hi Penny,
While reading this poem I was reminded of those words:- If music be the food of love, play on.
Music stirs the imagination and creates atmosphere, touching each one of us, just like your poem did me.
Jenny.
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This is so beautiful Di, it
Posted on Tue, 04 Feb 2020
This is so beautiful Di, it made me feel all fuzzy and warm inside. I can't pick out a line or stanza, because the whole poem is just a perfect representation of the coming spring.
One of your best definitely.
Jenny.
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Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Tue, 28 Jan 2020
Hi Rhiannon,
you know I think Shakespeare was right when he said:- "If music be the food of love, play on give me excess of it." Most of my life has been filled with musical memories and I don't know where I would have been without them....
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What a lovely warm poem
Posted on Thu, 23 Jan 2020
What a lovely warm poem Rhiannon.
I love how the little stuffed dog brings a smile to the face of the lady in the photo.
I also could feel it in your poem too.
Thank you for sharing, put a smile on my face. ...
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