It's amazing what nature can teach us. The struggles of the garden are similar to our own struggles in life. Nature can be beautiful, but it can also be cruel too, but that's just part of life in the end.
I like how you explain the fact that we humans are all individual, drawn to some kindred spirits that have a deep impact on our lives. The prism is a very clever idea too, it's what makes the world go round and shines on us all...
Lovely poem Di, reminds me
Posted on Fri, 14 Aug 2020
Lovely poem Di, reminds me that the insect world comes to life at this time of year.
Jenny.
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He is in such a dark place
Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2020
He is in such a dark place now and has no idea of what he's done.
A great cliff hanger.
Jenny.
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It's amazing what nature can
Posted on Sat, 08 Aug 2020
It's amazing what nature can teach us. The struggles of the garden are similar to our own struggles in life. Nature can be beautiful, but it can also be cruel too, but that's just part of life in the end.
This was how I read your poem. It...
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I hope Mark comes around to
Posted on Thu, 06 Aug 2020
I hope Mark comes around to believing Oren, there's nothing worse than confiding in a friend and them telling you, 'it's your imagination.'
Continuing to enjoy.
Jenny.
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Well I've finally caught up
Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2020
Well I've finally caught up with your exciting story. I can now see why it was important to read the prologue, it gives perspective to this part.
Looking forward to reading more.
Jenny.
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Hear! Hear Luigi,
Posted on Mon, 03 Aug 2020
Hear! Hear Luigi,
a poem we should all come back to and read again and again to keep the awareness going.
Wise words indeed.
Hope you're keeping well.
Jenny. xx
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He was very brave to call out
Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2020
He was very brave to call out to those beings, I would have run away quick.
Still enjoying.
Jenny.
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I'm glad Phileus had the
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020
I'm glad Phileus had the sense to stick to his guns and not let Horneblende intimidate him.
Jenny.
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Your poem left me quite
Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2020
Your poem left me quite tearful. The fact that Obaysch tried so hard to be loved and accepted, yet this was seen as a weakness. Very sad indeed.
Your writing held a lot of strong emotion.
Jenny.
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Hi Penny,
Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2020
Hi Penny,
I like how you explain the fact that we humans are all individual, drawn to some kindred spirits that have a deep impact on our lives. The prism is a very clever idea too, it's what makes the world go round and shines on us all...
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