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This part has everything in
Posted on Sun, 22 Sep 2024
Hi Penny,
this part has everything in it, mystery, romance, magic. I like how the story is coming together and the varied cast of characters are slowly discovering the truth...of course with thanks to Willow.
I don't normally read this kind of information. But you make so many valid points that I just had to comment. It sounds like Ted Kaczynski had some notions of where technology is taking us that compare to my feelings.
Your story is so irresistible with its compelling magic. I'm wondering how Daphne will feel once the honesty tea wears off, I expect she'll be regretting telling them about Avery...but that's what makes the story so interesting and intriguing....
Phew! What a tense episode. I agree with Di, the drama and tension are first class. Now we have another cliffhanger to look forward to finding out. You have the urgency of the situation spot on.
poor Vanessa started out by wanting a companion, now she's afraid he's finding new friends. It's a shame she's not more focussed on discovering her own hobbies, so she has an outlet for her emotions.
Wonderful poem PauI. I could really emerse my inner child's imagination as I read. But then I just love fantasy and you've really captured the essence perfectly.
This part has everything in
Posted on Sun, 22 Sep 2024
Hi Penny,
this part has everything in it, mystery, romance, magic. I like how the story is coming together and the varied cast of characters are slowly discovering the truth...of course with thanks to Willow.
Still reading and...
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Very much enjoyed your story
Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024
Very much enjoyed your story Harry. You capture the imagination of the the little boy perfectly.
I like the setting too, reminds me of the 1960s.
Jenny,
Read full commentPosted in Tom All Alone (1)
Oh! Phil, you're keeping the
Posted on Fri, 20 Sep 2024
Oh! Phil, you're keeping the suspense going so well. I wonder! How Josiah and Archibald are doing.
This is another enthralling part to your story that I so enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Bring Him Home (Dead Reckoning series - Part 27)
I'm so glad to see this well
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024
I'm so glad to see this well explained writing got story of the week. Let's hope it's read by many.
Big congrats from me.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Where Are We Now? Ted Kaczynski and Technological Society
Your poem had my mouth
Posted on Tue, 17 Sep 2024
Your poem had my mouth watering Rhiannon. So yummy for this time of the year.
Love the photos too.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Delicious harvest
I don't normally read this
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024
I don't normally read this kind of information. But you make so many valid points that I just had to comment. It sounds like Ted Kaczynski had some notions of where technology is taking us that compare to my feelings.
Like you said there...
Read full commentPosted in Where Are We Now? Ted Kaczynski and Technological Society
Your story is so irresistible
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024
Your story is so irresistible with its compelling magic. I'm wondering how Daphne will feel once the honesty tea wears off, I expect she'll be regretting telling them about Avery...but that's what makes the story so interesting and intriguing....
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 17
Phew! What a tense episode. I
Posted on Sat, 14 Sep 2024
Phew! What a tense episode. I agree with Di, the drama and tension are first class. Now we have another cliffhanger to look forward to finding out. You have the urgency of the situation spot on.
It's great to see the gold cherries on this...
Read full commentPosted in Drowning Not Waving (Dead Reckoning series - Part 26)
Hi Jane,
Posted on Fri, 13 Sep 2024
Hi Jane,
poor Vanessa started out by wanting a companion, now she's afraid he's finding new friends. It's a shame she's not more focussed on discovering her own hobbies, so she has an outlet for her emotions.
I like the idea of...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You.. - Part 34
Wonderful poem PauI. I could
Posted on Fri, 13 Sep 2024
Wonderful poem PauI. I could really emerse my inner child's imagination as I read. But then I just love fantasy and you've really captured the essence perfectly.
Very much enjoyed.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Bedtime Stories
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