My eyes follow you into rain feeling dry earth becoming moist, growth echoing below meadow sweet pulsing daisies and buttercups to rise, flutter leaf...
The line:- Strange things are happening everyday. Taken from Alison Krauss and Robert Plant's record track Sister Rosetta Goes Before Us. https://www...
I like how Spencer and Lorenzo's characters were working for the good of humans. Let's hope those good qualities continue...though I feel there will be many more ups and downs.
I was so moved by this beautiful poem, each word is richly woven into nature's folklore, reminding me of times gone by and Victorian ladies in cottage gardens, where perfume fills the air, along with her wild flowers, and the lady is at one with...
I like the rhythm and rhyme in the first part of this poem Rhiannon. You pick up on not only the heat of the summer, but also the high emotions all around the country. Anger doesn't get anyone anywhere as you describe.
You managed to fit so much into this poem Ed, and embraced every moment. In Hyde Park with Mick Jagger stands out for me, when he read that poem in tribue to Brian Jones and they released all those butterflies. Although I wasn't there, it must...
A perfect example of how we
Posted on Wed, 14 Aug 2024
A perfect example of how we use a garden, for all ages Rhiannon.
Love the lines:-
a place for imagination
to take wing.
That's how I feel.
Also those last four lines sum up your poem for me.
Jenny....
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I very much enjoyed reading
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2024
I very much enjoyed reading Luigi, It seems like you have the perfect surroundings to relax in, and it's validated by the cat from next door.
Jenny. xx
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I agree with Di, you've taken
Posted on Fri, 09 Aug 2024
I agree with Di, you've taken the storyline and set the scene for gripping intrigue as to where the characters will go next.
Looking forward to reading more.
Jenny.
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I like how Spencer and
Posted on Sat, 10 Aug 2024
I like how Spencer and Lorenzo's characters were working for the good of humans. Let's hope those good qualities continue...though I feel there will be many more ups and downs.
Addictive reading as always Jane.
Jenny.
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I was so moved by this
Posted on Tue, 06 Aug 2024
I was so moved by this beautiful poem, each word is richly woven into nature's folklore, reminding me of times gone by and Victorian ladies in cottage gardens, where perfume fills the air, along with her wild flowers, and the lady is at one with...
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Hi Yutka,
Posted on Wed, 07 Aug 2024
Hi Yutka,
this was such a skilful, mesmerizing poem, that captures so many imaginative metaphores,
I especially liked that third stanza, but the whole poem was so poweful and well crafted.
Jenny.
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I like the rhythm and rhyme
Posted on Mon, 05 Aug 2024
I like the rhythm and rhyme in the first part of this poem Rhiannon. You pick up on not only the heat of the summer, but also the high emotions all around the country. Anger doesn't get anyone anywhere as you describe.
We had a rain storm...
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You managed to fit so much
Posted on Mon, 05 Aug 2024
You managed to fit so much into this poem Ed, and embraced every moment. In Hyde Park with Mick Jagger stands out for me, when he read that poem in tribue to Brian Jones and they released all those butterflies. Although I wasn't there, it must...
Read full commentPosted in Four of Plenty
Can't believe I missed this
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2024
Can't believe I missed this poem, it's a true imaginative masterpiece. Well deserved as poem of the month. Congratulations.
Jenny.
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Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Sat, 03 Aug 2024
Hi Rhiannon,
I love how you captured this flower in your photo. Perfectly written with that witty humour that gave me a smile.
Jenny.
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