Touch Of Class

By skinner_jennifer

Wed, 05 Aug 2020
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6 comments
 

Alabaster

Smoothness

Stirs senses,

Deep calm

Of touch

As fingers

Slide across

Cold curves.

 

Body would

boast warm

Sensuality

If human,

Subjected to

Roving eyes,

Passions

Consumed in

Desires we dream.

 

 

 

Certificate PG
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Comments

Submitted by Hades502 on

I really like the contrast between cold and warm here. It's very good, almost like--not sure if this is a correct interpretation--the difference between caressing a statue and caressing a person. Maybe touching the same person, but at different times? I like it.

GGHades502

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

You've got it in one Hades502, Thank you for stopping by to read and comment. Glad you liked.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

I love this phrase :

Deep calm

Of touch

Makes something physical into spiritual

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Hello Di,

I was thinking of statues of the human form when I wrote this. Just had this idea of how clever the artist that produce these wonderful statues must be. I've tried painting the naked body, but it always comes out wrong, which is why I admire them so much.

I tried to find a picture on pixabay, but couldn't find anything suitable enough for what I was seeing, so just left it to the readers imagination.

Thank you for stopping by to read and appreciate your thoughts.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhymes And Reasons on

'To Have The Marble Smooth Skin Of Youth.' A touch of class indeed. Wonderful Verse! heart

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Yes wouldn't it be wonderful to hold onto youth instead of aging. But we're all beautiful in our own way from the inside.

Thank you for your cherished comment Jacques.

Jenny. smiley