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Happy Weary Industry
Labourers wearily industrious in farm, field and hill - will they more leisure gain if machines take the strain? Industrial revolution. Folks flock...
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Present Grace, Future Perfect
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] … a leper … He touched him – no infection passed, …from Jesus cleansing flowed to cure … A man was paralysed …down through the roof they lowered him … First, Jesus pardoned him – some sneered …
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Illumination leaking in …
Confined to bed, an open window, a far-away hoot …
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Joseph in Egypt – slave, falsely accused, imprisonment, ruler
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] She tried to entice him to lie in her bed. Though far from his people, enslaved, yet he said, firm ‘No!’ to …
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First Choice
These three things will cost just that bit of money she’s given you – which would you like the most? You can choose – a bridge for your railway-line...
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You have caught here the
Posted on Tue, 22 May 2018
You have caught here the feeling of looking down on your life and family's ways when far apart, and the place you've just left, like if one could see a film catching each on their travels. It reminded me of one of my children (when very young)...
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Very clever! I love seeing
Posted on Wed, 23 May 2018
Very clever! I love seeing those first leaves emerging, and the simple cotyledon leaves often making food so that the more complex leaves can then grow. I liked this very much. The fragility and freshness of new leaves is lovely too isn't it, and...
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Oh, I really liked that -
Posted on Tue, 22 May 2018
Oh, I really liked that - just thinking of the lovely blossom simply. Short lived, but still lovely as you describe when it first falls, before trampling and mixing with … . Rhiannon
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I did have a little look, and
Posted on Sat, 14 Apr 2018
I did have a little look, and saw a suggestion that pale colours can use the weaker sun better, and are thereore more prevalant in the spring. Will return if gather any more thought on it!! Rhiannon
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I've been away. Just seen
Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018
I've been away. Just seen this. It seems to speak of an attempt to return to where one once knew a welcome, but for some reason there is no acceptance, no resonance. I also thought the line 'the only growing is old.' very telling, and...
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! I love to see the crinkled
Posted on Sat, 24 Mar 2018
! I love to see the crinkled up little leaves poking or 'squirting' out! So delicate often of colour and texture too. Rhiannon
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A lovely idea for Poetry
Posted on Sun, 18 Mar 2018
A lovely idea for Poetry Monthly. If we could donate our heart with its feelings and songs, how would we cultivate it?! Rhiannon
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A lovely picture of a family
Posted on Thu, 15 Mar 2018
A lovely picture of a family happy in the grace, values, and life given by Jesus. Rhiannon
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A dreamy time of day, and you
Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018
A dreamy time of day, and you've caught the sights rarely noticed and descibed them in such interesting ways. I felt the quiet of an evening stroll! Rhiannon
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I see you've done some work
Posted on Sat, 03 Mar 2018
I see you've done some work on this, smoothing, clarifying and introducing yet more ideas I think. Lots of interesting metaphors and observations. Personally, I feel you could in time probably make the reading even smoother, but that would...
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