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StoryThe lisping god of small things Itane Vero59 months 3 weeks ago
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My stories

Cherry

Ghigau 21

Sunday 16th July Exa was worrying; the visit from the detective had set her mind racing. It had been a long time since she’d asked her father for any...
Cherry

Ghigau 20

Sunday 16th July Lenny sat at the end of Lydia’s bed, feeling despondent, powerless and angry. Lydia was crying; silent tears left glistening tracks...
Cherry

Ghigau 19

Sunday 16th July The weather showed no sign of abating and the sun rose fierce and unfiltered, like some alien weapon sent to destroy the world. In...
Cherry

Ghigau 18

Sunday 16th July Alan Terence O’Donnell lived in Dongola Road, Plaistow, in a small, two-up-two-down, pebble-dashed house, probably built around 1900...
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Ghigau 17

Sunday 16th July Catherine Booth was at home and bored. It was another scorching day. The thermometer read 27 degrees and it wasn’t yet 10am. The air...

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41 of my comments have received 52 Great Feedback votes

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Great stuff, literally.

Posted on Thu, 18 Sep 2025

Great stuff, literally. Enjoyed this.

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Posted in Beige Goo Splat - (part 3)

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At the risk of repeating

Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025

At the risk of repeating myself, journalism is your calling. Evocative, nostalgic, elegiacal, it made me remember the London of my youth.

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Posted in My first new beginning

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Distils the thoughts and

Posted on Sat, 30 Aug 2025

Distils the thoughts and fears of many I suspect, great piece.

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Posted in For Whom The Bell Tolls (The Centre Seethes)

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Thank you very much for the

Posted on Mon, 18 Aug 2025

Thank you very much for the encouragement and the cherries, I hope to add more later this month.

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Posted in Ghigau 12

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Insights

Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025

Others have pointed out a few inconsistencies - nothing that a quick edit wouldn't fix I'm sure - and I take their points, but the tone and the characterization is so good. I think the author is female, which makes the male lead even more...

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Posted in The Vale - Part 1 (c)

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Good ending

Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2025

I love a twist, nice story.

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Posted in The lisping god of small things

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Nicely paced

Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025

I could see them in my minds eye - always the indicator of a good story for me. Nice one.

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Posted in Born on the 4th of July

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Damn those rogue apostrophes

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025

Thank you very much for the cherries and damn those rogue apostrophes!

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Posted in Ghigau 5

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Some really great lines in this

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025

Some great lines in this - I particularly liked 'A flicker of discomfort crossed her face as if my crumbling resolve unsettled her.'

 

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Posted in Snake Eyes May Cry

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Wow, thank you very much -

Posted on Thu, 26 Jun 2025

Wow, thank you very much - that means a lot.

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