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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Story | War Planes and Gardens | Jessiibear | 2 | 12 years 6 months ago |
| Collection | Tyrants and Clowns | Jessiibear | 0 | 12 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Electricity | sean mcnulty | 3 | 12 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Elder Earth: The Fight for Freedom | Rekuo Mehra | 2 | 12 years 6 months ago |
| Story | above below | Stuart Cannell | 2 | 12 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Inevitable (revised) | Jessiibear | 0 | 12 years 6 months ago |
| Story | will we be ugly | mikilowe | 1 | 12 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Searching You | Jessiibear | 6 | 12 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Davy Jones' Locker | Jessiibear | 3 | 12 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Cumulus | Jessiibear | 11 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Abigail | Jessiibear | 19 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | Your Thoughts? | Jessiibear | 2 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | Page Numbering | Jessiibear | 4 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | What Do You Think? | Jessiibear | 0 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | Writing Level | Jessiibear | 12 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | I'm Going Mad... | Jessiibear | 13 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | Desperate Search | Jessiibear | 2 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | RE: Handled | Jessiibear | 1 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | 500 Word Limit | Jessiibear | 13 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | Hello | Jessiibear | 9 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | Poetry | Jessiibear | 15 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | RE: Beautiful | Jessiibear | 2 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | RE: John and Gretchen | Jessiibear | 0 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | Quick Question - The World As We Know It | Jessiibear | 5 | 13 years 2 months ago |
| Forum topic | Credentials | Jessiibear | 7 | 13 years 2 months ago |
This lacks one thing: cherries ;)
Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2014
Thought I'd check you out again, you're so brilliant, Stuart.
Not one word wasted. Please please don't stop writing.
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Welcome
Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2014
Epic fantasy? I love fantasy.
Prologues, though, are more than not a waste. Whatever is in the prologue is likely able to be weaved into the chapters or omitted. I would recommend--as many authors, editors and agents do--that you jump...
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Beautiful, Stuart :)
Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2014
That ending lol. I would pick out a few lines I particularily love, but they're all so packed with meaning and metaphorical wonder, the underlying theme, for me, shining through.
Beautiful, Stuart :)
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Nice
Posted on Tue, 01 Apr 2014
"of wide eyed spring beauty
into metallic jugs and bottles
, forever until
ever,"
And the very last line are possibly my favourites. I like the feel this gives me.
Great,
Jess
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