Journal of Isla Loren — March 23 Location: the kitchen counter Weather: cool white-grey sky, like static, making everything feel flattened, like I’m...
Journal of Isla Loren March 22 Location: kitchen window, facing the ocean Weather: overcast, like gauze over a wound Time: 8:02am ~ I should probably...
Journal of Isla Loren March 20 Location: Upstairs hallway outside the second bedroom Weather: Dark, thick like ink sealing the windows Time: 11:14 p...
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This broke my heart. It’s
Posted on Sun, 27 Jul 2025
This broke my heart. It’s beyond horrifying what was done to John Attard — in his own home, in his final days. I think about how many families trust care workers with their most vulnerable loved ones, and how impossible it must feel to suspect...
There’s something oddly tender here about folklore, myth, how rules get baked into stone (or sills), and how love - or absurdity - always finds a way around it. You had me fully invested in both the total collapse of society and the proper wear...
The rhyme scheme carried it along so smoothly, and I loved Emma’s little act of rebellion at the end — the percussion choice felt perfect for her. There’s a cheeky kind of charm here, like the whole thing is...
I feel like I just watched someone slowly spiral in real time, but like… with charm and actual style! You have such a specific tone — funny and self-aware but also lowkey heart-wrenching underneath. The part about disappointing a friend...
Thank you so much — that means a lot! And you’re absolutely right, there is something a little sinister stirring beneath the surface. I’m really glad the descriptions landed for you — I’ve been trying to let the atmosphere do some of the...
Wow—thank you so much for Pick of the Day! That really means a lot, and it was such a lovely surprise. This entry was actually one of the trickier ones for me to write, just because of how I’m trying to balance each journal entry working on its...
That line about despair slipping in—not through storms but under the door—stopped me. Very personal and accurate. And the story about your mother and John… I don’t even have words. Her gesture didn’t fail...
This broke my heart. It’s
Posted on Sun, 27 Jul 2025
This broke my heart. It’s beyond horrifying what was done to John Attard — in his own home, in his final days. I think about how many families trust care workers with their most vulnerable loved ones, and how impossible it must feel to suspect...
Read full commentPosted in John Attard.
This was an absolute riot. I
Posted on Mon, 28 Jul 2025
There’s something oddly tender here about folklore, myth, how rules get baked into stone (or sills), and how love - or absurdity - always finds a way around it. You had me fully invested in both the total collapse of society and the proper wear...
Read full commentPosted in There’s a Guy Works Down the Chip Shop Swears He’s Engels
There’s something so soft and
Posted on Mon, 28 Jul 2025
There’s something so soft and heat-soaked about this - like that drowsy golden feeling just before a storm.
Thanks for sharing :)
Read full commentPosted in Season Of Love
This was such a fun read!
Posted on Mon, 28 Jul 2025
This was such a fun read!
The rhyme scheme carried it along so smoothly, and I loved Emma’s little act of rebellion at the end — the percussion choice felt perfect for her. There’s a cheeky kind of charm here, like the whole thing is...
Read full commentPosted in A Discordant Note
I feel like I just watched
Posted on Sun, 20 Jul 2025
I feel like I just watched someone slowly spiral in real time, but like… with charm and actual style! You have such a specific tone — funny and self-aware but also lowkey heart-wrenching underneath. The part about disappointing a friend...
Read full commentPosted in Worst Case Scenario - Being Peter To Save Paul (Part One)
Thank you so much — that
Posted on Wed, 09 Jul 2025
Thank you so much — that means a lot! And you’re absolutely right, there is something a little sinister stirring beneath the surface. I’m really glad the descriptions landed for you — I’ve been trying to let the atmosphere do some of the...
Read full commentPosted in Entry 8 — Like It Had Always Belonged
Your descriptions are so
Posted on Sun, 22 Jun 2025
Your descriptions are so vivid and physical, I felt like I was right there on the edge with him. Strong start!
Posted in Ghigau
Wow—thank you so much for
Posted on Wed, 09 Jul 2025
Wow—thank you so much for Pick of the Day! That really means a lot, and it was such a lovely surprise. This entry was actually one of the trickier ones for me to write, just because of how I’m trying to balance each journal entry working on its...
Read full commentPosted in Entry 8 — Like It Had Always Belonged
This is devastingly beautiful
Posted on Thu, 03 Jul 2025
This is devastingly beautiful.
That line about despair slipping in—not through storms but under the door—stopped me. Very personal and accurate. And the story about your mother and John… I don’t even have words. Her gesture didn’t fail...
Read full commentPosted in The Gesture
This really resonated. You’ve
Posted on Wed, 02 Jul 2025
This really resonated. You’ve captured not just the frustration but the human cost of all these changes with such clarity.
The line “People will die” echoed through the whole piece—it’s tragic because it’s true!
So many are...
Read full commentPosted in "The Doctor Will See You Now."
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