Through the fogged lens

By IzzyBrizzi

Mon, 14 Jul 2025
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Through the fogged lens

 

A fogged dome obstructs the old documentary,
its once vibrant colours now subdued and dampened.
Try as you might to peer through the hazed screen-
memories from my bygone and then reluctant to return. 

Certificate U
Poem

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Submitted by Jessiibear on

This is lovely. I like the mood of it, that quiet weight.

The last line especially got me: “memories from my bygone and then reluctant to return.” There’s something so honest in that. 

Jess <3

Submitted by IzzyBrizzi on

Thanks for the kind words! It’s the line I gave the most time to, maybe because it had to carry a quiet kind of weight. Glad it resonated. heart

 

Submitted by hilary west on

Hi,

I liked this wistful, little poem. A nice impression !

hilary   smiley

 

Submitted by IzzyBrizzi on

Thank you! heart