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Cherry

My Boy

By Bee on Sun, 23 Aug 2015

A poem for my kitten.
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While You Are Away

By Bee on Sat, 22 Aug 2015

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Unconditional

By Bee on Fri, 21 Aug 2015

With thanks
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Book Ends

By Bee on Sat, 15 Aug 2015

Here are some words - my words for you scurry across the page on busy little legs to toil amongst the diamonds; climb the hill to the top of meaning...
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Back to Beach

By Bee on Tue, 11 Aug 2015

I went back to the beach but you were not there so I waited till half light and slept in the sand cooling till dark when I woke up and passed out the...
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280 of my comments have received 266 Great Feedback votes

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Really sad. There's a feeling

Posted on Fri, 02 Jan 2015

Really sad. There's a feeling of regret, too , I think. At least someone cared - then wrote this lovely, atmospheric poem. 

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Posted in Rock Bottom

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Such a matter of fact run

Posted on Fri, 19 Dec 2014

Such a matter of fact run through of a life -(so far), without an apparent opinion, leaving the reader to decide how to feel about the events, joyful, sorrowful. Such a mixture, even though one event overpowers the rest. I felt a positive...

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Posted in A Passing Thought

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As usual, you've tied this

Posted on Thu, 18 Dec 2014

As usual, you've tied this all together so brilliantly, Jean. Difficult though it must have been for him to tie all the notes together to make a book, you did it, and did so, fascinatingly. Full of hardship and lack of foresight with regard to...

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Posted in We Who Survived -18 - Visit to the Sager Sisters part 2, Epilogue

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Letting go is the hardest

Posted on Wed, 17 Dec 2014

Letting go is the hardest thing, especially when you were never supposed to. There's so much love in this, Tina. It's heartbreaking. It's something about looking back at the memories - and no one knows back then, what's ahead. As usual, no...

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Posted in Quarter to January

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Something rings so horribly

Posted on Sun, 09 Nov 2014

Something rings so horribly true in the nature of this. It reminded me of loads of stuff it would fit in with. Surreal, horribly fascinating and compelling. 

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Posted in Collecting Samples

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Most of all, I really felt

Posted on Fri, 28 Nov 2014

Most of all, I really felt the loneliness in this. No one to confide in, and having been 'groomed' using apparent common interests, the feeling of the greatest betrayal and desertion. There's so much more to the story than is written. Very clever...

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Posted in Only Silence Speaks the Language of Birds

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This was fantastic - made me

Posted on Mon, 17 Nov 2014

This was fantastic - made me laugh as well. Loved the ending. Loved everything. 

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Posted in I Woke up and!!!

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This is brilliantly written.

Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2014

This is brilliantly written. I really got that feeling of when everything goes unreasurringly fragile about you , and even the ground under your feet doesn't feel solid enough, as if something awful is about to happen. The undulating of...

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Posted in The Dinner Party

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I found this unsettling. It

Posted on Fri, 14 Nov 2014

I found this unsettling. It is very well expressed and I agree with scratch, honest style writing. There's a sort of longing, yet at the same time pride that blocks the narrator from allowing himself to be reinstated into the grace of his 'tribe...

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Posted in Living on the edges

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This is beautiful. You took

Posted on Fri, 07 Nov 2014

This is beautiful. You took the reader there.

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Posted in Train stop

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