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While You Are Away
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Unconditional
With thanks
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Book Ends
Here are some words - my words for you scurry across the page on busy little legs to toil amongst the diamonds; climb the hill to the top of meaning...
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Back to Beach
I went back to the beach but you were not there so I waited till half light and slept in the sand cooling till dark when I woke up and passed out the...
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This is a fascinating story
Posted on Thu, 08 Jan 2015
This is a fascinating story of love and possession, and really well written. For me, there's a compulsion to see what he doesn't want to come true, and if he gets what he would, or should want, he'll lose all. I'm probably jibbering talkish, so I...
Read full commentPosted in A Bowl of Water Falls
This first stanza is
Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015
This first stanza is amazingly deep and - the 'no more than you are in the sketch you would have drawn of them.' is so strong I can't stop thinking about it. To not be in something you never got to do is the most less there of possibility - too...
Read full commentPosted in You Are No More...
Really sad. There's a feeling
Posted on Fri, 02 Jan 2015
Really sad. There's a feeling of regret, too , I think. At least someone cared - then wrote this lovely, atmospheric poem.
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Such a matter of fact run
Posted on Fri, 19 Dec 2014
Such a matter of fact run through of a life -(so far), without an apparent opinion, leaving the reader to decide how to feel about the events, joyful, sorrowful. Such a mixture, even though one event overpowers the rest. I felt a positive...
Read full commentPosted in A Passing Thought
As usual, you've tied this
Posted on Thu, 18 Dec 2014
As usual, you've tied this all together so brilliantly, Jean. Difficult though it must have been for him to tie all the notes together to make a book, you did it, and did so, fascinatingly. Full of hardship and lack of foresight with regard to...
Read full commentPosted in We Who Survived -18 - Visit to the Sager Sisters part 2, Epilogue
Letting go is the hardest
Posted on Wed, 17 Dec 2014
Letting go is the hardest thing, especially when you were never supposed to. There's so much love in this, Tina. It's heartbreaking. It's something about looking back at the memories - and no one knows back then, what's ahead. As usual, no...
Read full commentPosted in Quarter to January
Something rings so horribly
Posted on Sun, 09 Nov 2014
Something rings so horribly true in the nature of this. It reminded me of loads of stuff it would fit in with. Surreal, horribly fascinating and compelling.
Read full commentPosted in Collecting Samples
Most of all, I really felt
Posted on Fri, 28 Nov 2014
Most of all, I really felt the loneliness in this. No one to confide in, and having been 'groomed' using apparent common interests, the feeling of the greatest betrayal and desertion. There's so much more to the story than is written. Very clever...
Read full commentPosted in Only Silence Speaks the Language of Birds
This was fantastic - made me
Posted on Mon, 17 Nov 2014
This was fantastic - made me laugh as well. Loved the ending. Loved everything.
Read full commentPosted in I Woke up and!!!
This is brilliantly written.
Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2014
This is brilliantly written. I really got that feeling of when everything goes unreasurringly fragile about you , and even the ground under your feet doesn't feel solid enough, as if something awful is about to happen. The undulating of...
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