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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | Result! (part 1) | Bee | 32 | 10 years 4 months ago |
| Story | You Send Me | Bee | 11 | 10 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Happy Days | Silver Spun Sand | 8 | 10 years 4 months ago |
| Story | A short version of my life | Verity Valentine | 2 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Order | Bee | 13 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | To Glimpse a Butterfly | Silver Spun Sand | 14 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | where the hearses be | JupiterMoon | 3 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Sea Bird | Bee | 7 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Party | Bee | 19 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Rebecca | pombal | 6 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Epitaphs | EB | 12 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Of a New Year's Eve | Silver Spun Sand | 4 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | At the Year’s Gate | Rhiannonw | 6 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | How Are You? | luigi_pagano | 6 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | The Eagles And Me | mcscraic | 4 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Through The Looking Glass | forest_for_ever | 4 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Hope Springs Eternal | luigi_pagano | 6 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | The Guy Pushing Big Issue | Silver Spun Sand | 8 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | without ever seeing the sun | nancy_am | 3 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | My ten years as a dancing monkey | Terrence Oblong | 7 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Near myth | lenchenelf | 2 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | Boxing Day (2016) | trevor_mossop | 1 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | On Asking for the Moon | Silver Spun Sand | 2 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | The Worker Bee | JackJakins | 1 | 10 years 5 months ago |
| Story | My Man | jeand | 13 | 10 years 5 months ago |
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HUMANITY
Stream in scream and struggle push and shovel hunger, linger longer squat in squaller, fight each other in strange lands as at home. Babies fail,...
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In Windows
I think I saw a bird dart from the palm tree by my window, and wondered if the bird I thought I saw saw me. In the glass of the concrete building...
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No Room For Water
I'd had a rough few days feeling sick and sore all over, but no actual high temperature. They tell you that when you are on chemo and you feel unwell...
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'schooled me in draughts
Posted on Thu, 05 Feb 2015
'schooled me in draughts
Read full commentand dominoes and dancing
on your brogues...' That's my favorite. And I found the ending very moving - that need to remember - the sudden importance in getting it right. And you always do, Tina.
Posted in Only Cats Know When to Walk Away
That second verse is lush!
Posted on Wed, 04 Feb 2015
That second verse is lush! Gorgeous, sexy poem, cleverly built crescendo, fading in tranquil diminuendo. Get the feeling you might have been listening to music whilst writing. I thought this was brilliant, Tina.
Read full commentPosted in Shenandoah
Hi Tina, I loved the elusive
Posted on Sat, 31 Jan 2015
Hi Tina, I loved the elusive and ethereal feel to the poem - felt the freshness all cut through with the solid reality of power lines and warm clothes - the ending bringing us back to reality. It all came together as such a vivid picture -...
Read full commentPosted in Late January Morn
Beautifully expressed,
Posted on Fri, 30 Jan 2015
Beautifully expressed, Shannan. Singing is great - writing can fill in the gaps spmetimes too. I've just been on your home page and started listening to you read your work. I love hearing people read their own stuff, and your reading is lovely....
Read full commentPosted in Friday nights...
This is so bright and vivid,
Posted on Wed, 14 Jan 2015
This is so bright and vivid, jolono, I could see it all and feel the emotions. Touched my heart, and weirdly, brought back memories, even though I wasn't there. Also loved the title and the way it rolls off the tongue.
Read full commentPosted in Under A London Sky
Lovely, sweet and sad.
Posted on Tue, 13 Jan 2015
Lovely, sweet and sad.
Read full commentPosted in You promised
'They tell her secrets they
Posted on Sat, 10 Jan 2015
'They tell her secrets they’ve never told anyone before. Then they feel guilty and relieved and a little haunted when she disappears.' - I loved that. Clever.
And - 'She refuses to sleep with me, claiming that she’s too old and besides she...
Read full commentPosted in the visitor
Reading this, I was struck by
Posted on Sat, 10 Jan 2015
Reading this, I was struck by what it would have meant to write, and especially, to receive letters like these. A brilliant way to piece together a story and a natural way to supply detail. Really well done!
Read full commentPosted in Laura's Letters - 3 - The Next Year
This is a fascinating story
Posted on Thu, 08 Jan 2015
This is a fascinating story of love and possession, and really well written. For me, there's a compulsion to see what he doesn't want to come true, and if he gets what he would, or should want, he'll lose all. I'm probably jibbering talkish, so I...
Read full commentPosted in A Bowl of Water Falls
This first stanza is
Posted on Wed, 07 Jan 2015
This first stanza is amazingly deep and - the 'no more than you are in the sketch you would have drawn of them.' is so strong I can't stop thinking about it. To not be in something you never got to do is the most less there of possibility - too...
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