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StoryDear Philip, Spring, 2010 jeand810 years 4 months ago
Story'Girl by Moonlight' Silver Spun Sand810 years 4 months ago
StoryA Universal Language Ewan210 years 4 months ago
StoryLife is a Book of Apologies Bee1310 years 4 months ago
StoryDay 1 Horseinabathtub210 years 4 months ago
StoryDecember Rhiannonw810 years 4 months ago
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StoryOn Shaving jeand910 years 4 months ago
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StoryLord of flies Stephen Thom2610 years 4 months ago
StoryAbout My Daughter... Silver Spun Sand1410 years 4 months ago
StoryMy Jewels luigi_pagano610 years 4 months ago
StoryHospice of Horror camilla310 years 5 months ago
StoryThe Maths Tutor (Poetry Monthly) Philip Sidney1410 years 5 months ago
StoryLight in the Dark Age Philip Sidney2810 years 5 months ago
StoryThe Child lisa h1910 years 5 months ago
StoryOperation Sat-Nav Rhiannonw610 years 5 months ago
StoryDear Philip jeand1510 years 5 months ago
StoryFor Elice jeand910 years 5 months ago
StorySprayed Words (Poetry Monthly) Rhiannonw1610 years 5 months ago
StoryThe Journey to End all Journeys (Poetry Monthly) Silver Spun Sand710 years 5 months ago
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Dear Milly-Mops

You will not hear me howl a raucous cry - as I imagine you within your row - tears welled in your tender blues - babies at your side. But I will beg...
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Beach

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Pain Behaving Badly

After a bad night...
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The Chemotherapy Red Blues

The stupidest poem ever written!

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280 of my comments have received 266 Great Feedback votes

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I love the way this story

Posted on Fri, 31 Oct 2014

I love the way this story builds, but from her awareness of his screaming that last scene is simply brilliant - the cloth the tomatoes falling, hitting the floor, all that breaking and spilling as blood, and that line - 'the air – full of war,...

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Posted in 'Poppies in the Snow'

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Maybe if we over think things

Posted on Fri, 24 Oct 2014

Maybe if we over think things there will be no answer except that secret signs are what they are - secrets. Paranoid overactive brains are not a relaxing combination, I really enjoyed reading this thought provoking piece and overthinking about it...

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Posted in On the Pavement

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Hi Damian.

Posted on Wed, 22 Oct 2014

Hi Damian.

This is a hard and sad story which is told like a statement of truth. In some places it's not quite clear, but I still get what's going on. Reading this, to me it feels like the bones of, or an outline of something that could be...

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Posted in When faith is gone (part 1)

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What!

Posted on Thu, 16 Oct 2014

What!

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Posted in Ebola.

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People of either gender get

Posted on Thu, 09 Oct 2014

People of either gender get ridiculed for not leaving, but there are always so many compelling reasons to stay. As you point out - love for partner - so 'understand', can't afford to and don't want to leave the home, and in the case of a man,...

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Posted in Something Inside

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Beautiful imagery. I felt the

Posted on Wed, 01 Oct 2014

Beautiful imagery. I felt the whole process of aging in everything you so vividly, yet delicately describe.

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Posted in Aridity's Garden

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I find your zeal inspiring,

Posted on Wed, 17 Sep 2014

I find your zeal inspiring, but I am wondering what God said to make you think he wanted you to starve yourself for two days. It seems a little strange to me that you would thank him for the food he provided for you, then not eat it. This is...

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Posted in My Apology!

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I love them. I have the deep

Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014

I love them. I have the deep purple as well as the more common lilac, thanks to my dear friend and neighbour, Lil, who I sadly lost a few years since. I have taken many cuttings from the white, but they have always reverted. I love to watch the...

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Posted in Reaching for the Sun

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The promise is wonderful -

Posted on Wed, 03 Sep 2014

The promise is wonderful - heartbreakingly so, and makes it all so clear. Such lovely words, Tina. Sad time.

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Posted in Schiehallion

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Dear Elsie,

Posted on Sat, 30 Aug 2014

Dear Elsie,

so nice to see you again. This piece is beautifully written with warmth and honest affection. Sounds like you had so much fun together and made some great memories. Such a lovely letter. She sounds wonderful.

Bee x...

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