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Cherry

Dear Milly-Mops

By Bee on Mon, 10 Aug 2015

You will not hear me howl a raucous cry - as I imagine you within your row - tears welled in your tender blues - babies at your side. But I will beg...
Love
Poem
Certificate U
Cherry

Hidden in Meaning

By Bee on Fri, 07 Aug 2015

Love
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Cherry

Beach

By Bee on Thu, 06 Aug 2015

Unclassified
Poem
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Cherry

Pain Behaving Badly

By Bee on Tue, 04 Aug 2015

After a bad night...
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Autobiography
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Cherry

The Chemotherapy Red Blues

By Bee on Mon, 03 Aug 2015

The stupidest poem ever written!
Rant
Horror
Humour
Autobiography
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288 of my comments have received 274 Great Feedback votes

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This is brilliantly written.

Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2014

This is brilliantly written. I really got that feeling of when everything goes unreasurringly fragile about you , and even the ground under your feet doesn't feel solid enough, as if something awful is about to happen. The undulating of...

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Posted in The Dinner Party

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I found this unsettling. It

Posted on Fri, 14 Nov 2014

I found this unsettling. It is very well expressed and I agree with scratch, honest style writing. There's a sort of longing, yet at the same time pride that blocks the narrator from allowing himself to be reinstated into the grace of his 'tribe...

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Posted in Living on the edges

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This is beautiful. You took

Posted on Fri, 07 Nov 2014

This is beautiful. You took the reader there.

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Posted in Train stop

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I love the way this story

Posted on Fri, 31 Oct 2014

I love the way this story builds, but from her awareness of his screaming that last scene is simply brilliant - the cloth the tomatoes falling, hitting the floor, all that breaking and spilling as blood, and that line - 'the air – full of war,...

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Posted in 'Poppies in the Snow'

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Maybe if we over think things

Posted on Fri, 24 Oct 2014

Maybe if we over think things there will be no answer except that secret signs are what they are - secrets. Paranoid overactive brains are not a relaxing combination, I really enjoyed reading this thought provoking piece and overthinking about it...

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Posted in On the Pavement

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Hi Damian.

Posted on Wed, 22 Oct 2014

Hi Damian.

This is a hard and sad story which is told like a statement of truth. In some places it's not quite clear, but I still get what's going on. Reading this, to me it feels like the bones of, or an outline of something that could be...

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Posted in When faith is gone (part 1)

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What!

Posted on Thu, 16 Oct 2014

What!

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Posted in Ebola.

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People of either gender get

Posted on Thu, 09 Oct 2014

People of either gender get ridiculed for not leaving, but there are always so many compelling reasons to stay. As you point out - love for partner - so 'understand', can't afford to and don't want to leave the home, and in the case of a man,...

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Posted in Something Inside

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So pleased you heard it.

Posted on Tue, 07 Oct 2014

So pleased you heard it.

Thanks PT

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Posted in Bed is a Boat

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Beautiful imagery. I felt the

Posted on Wed, 01 Oct 2014

Beautiful imagery. I felt the whole process of aging in everything you so vividly, yet delicately describe.

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Posted in Aridity's Garden

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