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Ali Farka Touré and crochet on a Sunday

By Bee on Mon, 19 Oct 2015

A tribute to the man

Spiritual

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Like a Baby

By Bee on Wed, 14 Oct 2015

A poem from my son

Autobiography

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Oh Poet

By Bee on Mon, 12 Oct 2015

Your rhymed reason for being is seeing and saying the scene from every available angle with word trick imagery, and truths alluded to with...

Miscellaneous

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Boy

By Bee on Fri, 09 Oct 2015

Going through old recordings ...

Autobiography

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287 of my comments have received 273 Great Feedback votes

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I loved the description of

Posted on Wed, 27 May 2015

I loved the description of her, backlit with the sun on her shoulder, and that you bring her back to mind as she was - then at end, the poignant evacuee story; buttons for eyes, so lovingly sewn on the bear. That was touching.

Posted in Journeys

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That's nice, but what about

Posted on Sun, 24 May 2015

That's nice, but what about the people of Vietnam ?

Posted in God Is Benevolent

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Looking at love in an honest

Posted on Mon, 18 May 2015

Looking at love in an honest light from all angles doesn't detract from the real Angels here. So much love in the writing, and between the sisters. I found this piece very moving indeed.

Posted in No Angels

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This is very beautiful and

Posted on Fri, 15 May 2015

This is very beautiful and expresses a genuine and heartfelt devotion, Rhiannon. I'd love to hear it sung to the music i imagined for it. I found the repeated 'and I want to' very moving.

Posted in Sunday Song

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Beautiful pictures and an

Posted on Sun, 10 May 2015

Beautiful pictures and an outflowing of love in this. In line 9 - did you mean breathes? And I wonder if the first of the repeated word 'heart' in lines 26 and 28 could be changed, and if it might be better, or not, if you did. Lovely, the stream...

Posted in For Lisa

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Love seeps and flows and this

Posted on Sun, 03 May 2015

Love seeps and flows and this is very fluid in its movement. There's something joyful and accepting about it. I really like it.

Posted in Where wild water flows

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This has a Cider With Rosie

Posted on Sat, 02 May 2015

This has a Cider With Rosie type memory feel about it. Innocence and honesty combined, and the fruit makes it juicy to read with a child's eye view and taste of the occasion. It's special, this one.

Posted in Measles

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So pleased you saw all that

Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2015

So pleased you saw all that Vera. I hope your Mum's right - although for some reason, reading her motto brought a tear to my eye - a good one. Thank you.

Posted in Tree Me

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Guess it's all about just

Posted on Sun, 19 Apr 2015

Guess it's all about just being there. There's something very real, yet intangible about the subject.

Loved this one, Ed.

Posted in Pillow Talk

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We don't appreciate what we

Posted on Mon, 20 Apr 2015

We don't appreciate what we've got till it's gone. Though it's written in a light tone, I found this particularly moving.