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An amazing write, especially

Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2015

An amazing write, especially as the last part was written after you fell asleep in 1975 - time to wake up, I think....

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Posted in Thoughts on a Rooftop

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As Philip said, very

Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2015

As Philip said, very beautiful. And it does speak to all who have lost someone. I found it so very moving - in floods of tears - for the sadness, and the happiness you decided to adopt knowing it was what would be wanted from you. I so get that....

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Posted in I still feel you

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I feel that I remember this

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015

I feel that I remember this lovely poem - so fragile in the making, like those delicate wings of the butterfly and her memory that means so much. 
'Forget her?  
 
Simpler, by far, to straighten
a rainbow, bring peace to...

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Posted in Sara Orange-Tip Was Here

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Hi Tina.

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015

Hi Tina.

Sometimes I think - thank goodness for poetry, where we can let these thoughts and feelings flood out, when we don't get the opportunity to vent them on those who deserve the worst. And you do it so well - the writing, I mean. He...

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Posted in Doppelganger (Poetry Monthly)

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I think the scary thing in

Posted on Tue, 14 Jul 2015

I think the scary thing in this poem is that it's about to happen. Beautifully pictured.

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Posted in The Town the Wind Blew Away

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Oh, so clever! You built the

Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2015

Oh, so clever! You built the narrators character so brilliantly by using contrast to the 'main'  character, and the twist coming right at the end - you got me!!!

Great writing.

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Posted in Chalk And Cheese

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This is good, AE. 'no use

Posted on Sun, 12 Jul 2015

This is good, AE. 'no use assigning blame.' - that doesn't seem right as you are assigning blame. If you took that out, I think it would work well. Lots of emotion behind the words.

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Posted in Pushed

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Thanks for the lovely photo

Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2015

Thanks for the lovely photo of the glass half full. wink

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Posted in Positive Thinking

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I liked this. If it were mine

Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2015

I liked this. If it were mine, I'd omit the last line and leave the outcome to the readers imagination. Just a thought. But I thought it was really good.

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I loved reading this. It was

Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2015

I loved reading this. It was brought to life by the use of the clock - perfect and easy for anyone who's been on to picture. I got taken on as a present (unwanted because I know I hate being trapped in enclosed spaces). At the end of the queue, I...

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