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Disenchantment 41
***** I should have thought of that sooner. Thanatos had told me the last time that I was there that Epiales didn’t like the sound of the rushing...
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Disenchantment 40
***** He had been walking with his gun drawn until they left the wash and vegetation area. They had used the light of the fire that they had seen on...
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Disenchantment 39
***** “Pull over there,” said Mark. That’s Oren’s car. The other is Malbourne’s.” Hornblende pulled over on the opposite side of the road and they...
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Disenchantment 38
Part IV February/Anthesterion Into Hell I love you. I have always loved you. I have loved you ever since I met you and I truly believe that I was...
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Disenchantment 37
They left the shower area walked into the break room, which had a window that allowed a little of the outside light into the room. “You’re going to...
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Really cool. I loved the
Posted on Tue, 26 Oct 2021
Really cool. I loved the ending. Perfectly worded and a great way to sum up all you had written before it.
My apologies for not having been on here for a time and getting behind in reading your stuff. I'll just be super busy until January...
Read full commentPosted in Dreams of Halloween
Another great one, Jenny
Posted on Sun, 26 Sep 2021
Another beautiful poem, Jenny. I really don't know what to say that I haven't said before about your poetry. Hmmm...let me find a favorite line: "Golden sunset devouring view." Nice imagery. Great job. Congratulations on the cherries.
Read full commentPosted in River Of Awareness
Hey Jenny, another great
Posted on Thu, 30 Sep 2021
Hey Jenny, another great nature poem. I like the setting of this one maybe because it just isn't as common a nature setting. Wow, look at the awards you got for it! Congratulations on the well-deserved cherries and picks.
Read full commentPosted in Stone Loach
Wow Paul, that was a treat to
Posted on Thu, 23 Sep 2021
Wow Paul, that was a treat to be able to listen to it as I read it. I have always felt poetry was best listened to rather than merely read. Quite the effect. That was very good. Congratulations on the cherries.
Read full commentPosted in Giant Redwoods
Hello Jenny, another very
Posted on Tue, 21 Sep 2021
Hello Jenny, another very well-written poem. Great job. It's shame this didn't get you any cherries. Some great lines that I could envision the scene before me. I really dug: "Moorland bracken tumbles over rocks."
Read full commentPosted in Beneath An Autumn Moon The Poem
Hey Paul, you seem to be
Posted on Sun, 19 Sep 2021
Hey Paul, you seem to be doing a lot of poetry lately. This is very good, beautifully worded. Good job and congratulations on the cherries.
Read full commentPosted in Autumn
Great writing
Posted on Tue, 07 Sep 2021
Hey Jenny, I really liked how you split that into two sections. Some strong writing and great imagery. Congrats on the cherries.
Read full commentPosted in Yin And Yang Of Autumn Forest
Another poem
Posted on Sun, 29 Aug 2021
Another poem from you. You are a good writer. It's interesting the way you do both prose and poetry very well. Congratulations on the cherries. Some very good writing.
Read full commentPosted in Ballerina Toy Box
Hey Paul
Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021
Hey Paul, good read. Interesting parallels.
Read full commentPosted in Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)
Good one
Posted on Sun, 29 Aug 2021
Hey Jenny, good one. I like the imagery in this one. I think like this a lot too. It's cool that you can look at some clouds and have all these thoughts about them. Great work.
Read full commentPosted in Going With The Flow
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