Part III February A Fall from Grace It was a gorgeous day. Mark felt alive, truly alive and glad to be. It was the first time in a long time that he...
Thirteen months later: “Here’s your new cell, shitbird,” said the guard. Turning to the current occupant, he said, “You know the drill, Grizzly.” The...
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Good one
Posted on Mon, 07 Jun 2021
Jenny, I am guessing this one is from your actual journal and you wrote it some time ago. I'm curious if that's true, or if that initial part about the diary is part of the poem itself. Yeah, I wonder weird stuff. Either way, it's very good....
Hey man, my apologies for not having looked at much of your stuff here recently. I've been busy for a couple months and will probably be busy for a couple more. No recent writing on my part. I just popped on here to do a little reading today....
Wow, a rare piece of Jenny prose. I'm assuming autobiographical, but you never really know. I have a habit of reflecting and romaticizing times and people gone by as well. I liked your literary references too. Great writing.
Hey Paul, good one, another poem, huh? I really liked this. Nice word usage in every single line. Those who have commented prior to me seem to have pointed that out as well. Very well written.
This is really good Jenny. Great word choices throught. You have a great way of explaining things: "When stars sing their last song," and "veiled by dawning of day," really stuck out for me. Great job.
I liked it. Nice delve into the scientific aspects, enough to show you know what you are talking about, but not enough to bore the hell out of the reader. I also might be discussing multiple universes in my current novel, but not sure yet if I...
Interesting read, nice and reflective. In your intro you mentioned that you were worried about being insensitive. I think others, especially in this day and age get offended too easily. I would encourage you to write what you are going to write,...
Good one
Posted on Mon, 07 Jun 2021
Jenny, I am guessing this one is from your actual journal and you wrote it some time ago. I'm curious if that's true, or if that initial part about the diary is part of the poem itself. Yeah, I wonder weird stuff. Either way, it's very good....
Read full commentPosted in In The Stillness Of Late Years
Interesting
Posted on Sun, 13 Jun 2021
Hey Jenny, another good nature poem, seems like your strength for sure.
Read full commentPosted in Honeysuckle On The Breeze
Good one
Posted on Mon, 21 Jun 2021
Hey Paul, I liked that. You do have a way with words. Good work.
Read full commentPosted in Estival Solstice
Great poem
Posted on Wed, 14 Apr 2021
Hey man, my apologies for not having looked at much of your stuff here recently. I've been busy for a couple months and will probably be busy for a couple more. No recent writing on my part. I just popped on here to do a little reading today....
Read full commentPosted in Setting Sons
Interesting
Posted on Thu, 25 Feb 2021
Wow, a rare piece of Jenny prose. I'm assuming autobiographical, but you never really know. I have a habit of reflecting and romaticizing times and people gone by as well. I liked your literary references too. Great writing.
Read full commentPosted in Timely Leisure Spent With You
Good one
Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2021
Hey Paul, good one, another poem, huh? I really liked this. Nice word usage in every single line. Those who have commented prior to me seem to have pointed that out as well. Very well written.
Read full commentPosted in Forgotten Souls
Good Read
Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2021
Another good one, Jenny. I always like and seem to appreciate the sad ones, the loss of hope, futility. Good stuff.
Read full commentPosted in Silent Lament
Another good one
Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2021
This is really good Jenny. Great word choices throught. You have a great way of explaining things: "When stars sing their last song," and "veiled by dawning of day," really stuck out for me. Great job.
Read full commentPosted in We Are Stars
Interesting
Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2021
I liked it. Nice delve into the scientific aspects, enough to show you know what you are talking about, but not enough to bore the hell out of the reader. I also might be discussing multiple universes in my current novel, but not sure yet if I...
Read full commentPosted in Happy Valentines
Interesting
Posted on Fri, 05 Feb 2021
Interesting read, nice and reflective. In your intro you mentioned that you were worried about being insensitive. I think others, especially in this day and age get offended too easily. I would encourage you to write what you are going to write,...
Read full commentPosted in The Theory of Everything (take 2)
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