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Storyjust deserts Di_Hard312 years 11 months ago
StoryThe Goodbye MJG113 years 2 months ago
StorySeptember Sun on Blackdown Hills MJG93 years 7 months ago
StoryMynydd Carningli (for TP's parents) MJG213 years 7 months ago
StoryIllicit Exercise Philip Sidney313 years 7 months ago
StoryPins (1) Stephen Thom163 years 7 months ago
StoryRamadan celticman183 years 9 months ago
Storythe little grey lady of the sea Coolhermit113 years 9 months ago
StoryAn Ill Wind MJG63 years 10 months ago
StoryAfter Gyles' Quay sean mcnulty43 years 10 months ago
StoryAdopting At Our Age penguin113 years 11 months ago
StoryRuby Red MJG03 years 11 months ago
StoryHart's Tongue Fern in March 2020 MJG74 years 1 month ago
StoryLast Christmas: the 2020 version gletherby34 years 1 month ago
StoryTrees on the Arapuni Road Philip Sidney264 years 1 month ago
StoryA Haunting MJG54 years 1 month ago
StoryGoodbye George MJG44 years 3 months ago
StoryA Slip of the Mother Tongue MJG94 years 4 months ago
Storya-minor prophet lithiviaoblivia74 years 4 months ago
StorySilk Moths’ Secrets (for Nobel prize-winner Adolf Friedrich Butenandt) MJG05 years 2 months ago
StoryNo Good News MJG35 years 4 months ago
StorySummer's end MJG25 years 6 months ago
StoryBlood and Other Substances Philip Sidney176 years 1 month ago
StoryToad Spring 2018 MJG46 years 2 months ago
StoryFirst Breath:Last Breath MJG126 years 2 months ago

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Teenage Twitterati

Homing instinct honed, they alight flapping, cawing, at midnight. Smoking on the wing, their sequined plumage drenched in vodka, bypassing my over-...
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Cocktail Hour in Kyiv

Arina’s dextrous fingers, so adept at teaching children to read and write, nimbly grate polystyrene in the park. The thickening agent is added to...
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Blueprint

Bulbs rustle in paper bags, pale corns, rhizomes, tubers to breathe new life into a barren corporate patch. Husks, tipped with green shoots, become...
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Swimming Snake

The grass snake purls water, spreads ripples across the canal’s slow-undulating surface. A miniature, muscular wave roils shadows of heaped summer...
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Heron-haunted Pool

Ropy jelly congeals in a shallow pool, fringed by rushes, swelling frogspawn absorbs blue sky into green shade. Tadpoles wiggle loose, like dark...
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18 of my comments have received 18 Great Feedback votes

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great imagery

Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2019

love the feeling of childhood, the wooden and woolen connection, the moths and cicadias and how the fallen trees link to bleached bones and pennies from soldiers. Beautifully depicted. 

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lovely

Posted on Sun, 19 Feb 2017

very much liked the feeling of being on the journey with you, 'intermittent percussion' of woodpecker - I could hear it so clearly.... I'd have finished it without the last two lines because the scene is already painted well...

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Posted in Forgotten Copse

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Beautiful, slow-moving, with

Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2016

Beautiful, slow-moving, with great depth and warmth and humanity.

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Posted in Blue

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what a delight....

Posted on Fri, 14 Nov 2014

bounces along all sparkly like freckles, I heard that a face without freckles is a sky without stars and that they are the kisses of Gods and fairies....

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Posted in CINNAMON FRECKLES

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Wonderful poem

Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014

great verve, colour and having just come back from a walk and several stings climbing over a style, so true, really enjoyed this... thank you!

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Posted in Nettles

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written with love and serenity

Posted on Sun, 06 Apr 2014

Read it at her wedding eveyone will love it....might take out all the 'the's' in first verse, don't need them and without takes you closer to action (not I didn't say 'the' action) and as many of those other ones as you can...x

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brilliant,

Posted on Tue, 01 Apr 2014

Enjoyed the language you used and the build-up feels very authentic.....and hands are very special to hold and they way they mould to yours........ not joined long enough to read all the chapters but well done for getting this far....

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