High School class “Sir can one be punished for something you didn't do? “Of course not my boy! “Thank-you sir I didn't do the assignment sir.” If you...
And Jacob served seven years for Rachel; and they seemed unto him but a few days, for the love he had to her. ~ Genesis 29: 20 As a hart roams in the...
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Just beautiful
Posted on Thu, 18 Oct 2018
Just beautiful. To me yellow is faithfulness, gold is noble and eternal. Your others could be, the colour blue serenity and peace perhaps, and red would be love.
A beautiful little poem, sometimes I wish I had children especially small children steal one's heart. Do you have? In the end thrown into the world they too must make their own way, fight their own fights, take their own chances. Without choice...
Mary-Anne I was very pleased to discover these new poems. Your poetry is really excellent and you always treat the subject matter with sensitivity. These are mostly happy themes often with children and then more serious and sometimes heart-ache...
Beautiful verse! Reminds me of Narnia! The language is pure and has a clarity and happiness. It is interresting that you start with autumn and end with spring and summer.
Yes it's clear now, your poem describes a birth, a baby, the beginnings of life and later the same, born again and to salvation. Do you have children? I don't, sometimes I think it must be nice they melt your heart. Just being themselves people...
Just beautiful
Posted on Thu, 18 Oct 2018
Just beautiful. To me yellow is faithfulness, gold is noble and eternal. Your others could be, the colour blue serenity and peace perhaps, and red would be love.
Good! Tom Brown
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A beautiful little poem, sometimes I wish I had
Posted on Wed, 17 Oct 2018
A beautiful little poem, sometimes I wish I had children especially small children steal one's heart. Do you have? In the end thrown into the world they too must make their own way, fight their own fights, take their own chances. Without choice...
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Good!
Posted on Thu, 30 Aug 2018
Good!
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Bob Dylan probably took his
Posted on Wed, 28 Feb 2018
Bob Dylan probably took his name from Dylan Thomas but that's another story. Or in other words indeed, this is the story, knocking on heaven's door.
Sorry I couldn't resist. Cheers James
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that good night
Posted on Wed, 28 Feb 2018
Dylan Thomas-
Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
I like your peaceful quiet approach much more. Sounds much more pleasant. One thinks also of Bob Dylan and some Van Morrison. However...
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Mary-Anne I was very pleased to discover these
Posted on Sun, 28 Jan 2018
Mary-Anne I was very pleased to discover these new poems. Your poetry is really excellent and you always treat the subject matter with sensitivity. These are mostly happy themes often with children and then more serious and sometimes heart-ache...
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Beautiful verse! Reminds me of Narnia!
Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017
Beautiful verse! Reminds me of Narnia! The language is pure and has a clarity and happiness. It is interresting that you start with autumn and end with spring and summer.
You must be a born optimist! Tom
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5.7 litre Ford V8
Posted on Mon, 24 Feb 2014
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Yes it's clear now, your poem
Posted on Sat, 16 Sep 2017
Yes it's clear now, your poem describes a birth, a baby, the beginnings of life and later the same, born again and to salvation. Do you have children? I don't, sometimes I think it must be nice they melt your heart. Just being themselves people...
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Please Note!
Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2017
Please note some facts are not meant as literal, there might also be misunderstandings. Take what you like and leave the rest.
Tom Brown
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