Fascination with the beauty of night skies is as old as humanity itself. Observations and study of the stars is as old as the earliest peoples as is...
Each year at the conference, "And what is that?" The patient "It's my dog, Woofter. On his leash." "Sorry you'll have to stay a year longer." At last...
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Beautiful verse! Reminds me of Narnia!
Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017
Beautiful verse! Reminds me of Narnia! The language is pure and has a clarity and happiness. It is interresting that you start with autumn and end with spring and summer.
Yes it's clear now, your poem describes a birth, a baby, the beginnings of life and later the same, born again and to salvation. Do you have children? I don't, sometimes I think it must be nice they melt your heart. Just being themselves people...
Something Greater, a Higher Power, Prime Mover, Creator God call Him/ It/ She what you will. Thanks for the comment! Very sensible, meaningful and sober. Eish! Tom
Children of the sky! A beautiful poem but it could perhaps be rounded off a bit? This really is just my impression, and also I probably can't be specific.
A snapshot. Makes me think of the old instamatic and those few photos, such treasured memories. What a lovely little poem Mary-Ann, so sweet and sensitive.
Beautiful Mary-Ann! And the answer would be Yes? And then, towards the end? Well I don't think this is about romantic love, a crush. It is about being born again.
Beautiful verse! Reminds me of Narnia!
Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017
Beautiful verse! Reminds me of Narnia! The language is pure and has a clarity and happiness. It is interresting that you start with autumn and end with spring and summer.
You must be a born optimist! Tom
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5.7 litre Ford V8
Posted on Mon, 24 Feb 2014
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Yes it's clear now, your poem
Posted on Sat, 16 Sep 2017
Yes it's clear now, your poem describes a birth, a baby, the beginnings of life and later the same, born again and to salvation. Do you have children? I don't, sometimes I think it must be nice they melt your heart. Just being themselves people...
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Please Note!
Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2017
Please note some facts are not meant as literal, there might also be misunderstandings. Take what you like and leave the rest.
Tom Brown
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Something Greater, a Higher Power
Posted on Sat, 30 Sep 2017
Something Greater, a Higher Power, Prime Mover, Creator God call Him/ It/ She what you will. Thanks for the comment! Very sensible, meaningful and sober. Eish! Tom
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Isn't it amazing
Posted on Wed, 20 Sep 2017
Isn't it amazing how unique a gesture can be? It's like fingerprint.
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People of the sky!
Posted on Sun, 14 May 2017
Children of the sky! A beautiful poem but it could perhaps be rounded off a bit? This really is just my impression, and also I probably can't be specific.
Keep well Mary-Ann! Tom Brown
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Nicotine is a bastard.
Posted on Tue, 19 Sep 2017
Nicotene is a bastard. For most people cold turkey works best. Four months is long you can kick the habit I'm sure.
All the best! Tom
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A snapshot. Makes me think
Posted on Wed, 20 Sep 2017
A snapshot. Makes me think of the old instamatic and those few photos, such treasured memories. What a lovely little poem Mary-Ann, so sweet and sensitive.
Keep well!
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Beautiful Mary-Ann!
Posted on Sat, 16 Sep 2017
Beautiful Mary-Ann! And the answer would be Yes? And then, towards the end? Well I don't think this is about romantic love, a crush. It is about being born again.
Keep well! Tom
Read full commentPosted in First Love
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