Father Time never stops or ponders to ask why? He just drifts on endlessly, never floundering the cogs go on consumed at every turn, like the hungry...
Cinnamon stood and watched as the ship builders came down to the beach. One of them was working on the ship Bracus was sailing in. From where she was...
Brilliant Hades, You take us down into the mystery of the underworld and leave the reader with a sense of intrigue. Now I'm looking forward to next part.
Quite a sad attitude that Florence has about all men and their relationships, she seems to draw a bleak picture of marriage. I do understand that these were different times, but I think it depends on how you see yourself within wedded bliss. My...
your in depth comment was very encouraging. You noticed all the little details. Sometimes walks are just about getting excercise, but then there's those days when everything matters, this was one of those times.
An absorbing poem of
Posted on Thu, 18 Nov 2021
An absorbing poem of spiritual thought, especially as I recall you mentioned your love of owls. I found your poem very inspiring Rachel.
Jenny.
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Hi Jean,
Posted on Wed, 17 Nov 2021
Hi Jean,
there's always a constant source of information for Maria to take down, lives full of ups and downs, great sadness, but also joy.
Your research is astounding Jean, with so much detail captured, even down to the final hours...
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I love this imaginative poem
Posted on Tue, 16 Nov 2021
I love this imaginative poem Paul, you capture the heart of November and bring into focus the beautiful mystery of nature.
Really enjoyed reading and sums up perfectly my feelings too.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in When November Comes (with audio)
Brilliant Hades, You take
Posted on Sat, 13 Nov 2021
Brilliant Hades, You take us down into the mystery of the underworld and leave the reader with a sense of intrigue. Now I'm looking forward to next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 43
A profound read, enjoying
Posted on Thu, 11 Nov 2021
A profound read, enjoying capturing those moments of being a boy once again.
Very much enjoyed reading this Richard.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Ramblin' Time
Quite a sad attitude that
Posted on Wed, 10 Nov 2021
Quite a sad attitude that Florence has about all men and their relationships, she seems to draw a bleak picture of marriage. I do understand that these were different times, but I think it depends on how you see yourself within wedded bliss. My...
Read full commentPosted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 12
I have a big smile on my face
Posted on Mon, 08 Nov 2021
I have a big smile on my face Paul,
found this so funny, will just have to...
Read full commentPosted in A Lorry Load of Sleaze
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Mon, 08 Nov 2021
your in depth comment was very encouraging. You noticed all the little details. Sometimes walks are just about getting excercise, but then there's those days when everything matters, this was one of those times.
Thank you for reading and...
Read full commentPosted in Inspired Walk
Some great descriptive,
Posted on Sat, 06 Nov 2021
Some great descriptive, imaginative metaphors and tension in this revengeful story, that had me gripped from beginning to end.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Reckoning
The story is coming together
Posted on Thu, 04 Nov 2021
The story is coming together so well Penny. I feel like a fly on the wall watching the mystery unfold.
Jenny.
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