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The camera doesn’t lie
The camera doesn't lie, but …
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on the brighter side …
Murder, lawlessness and pain, the strong abuse the weak again, warfare, rape and earthquake, flood; — but now we’ve news of …
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Dream with the breeze
Evening sunlight, escape and rise … – breeze waves the barley …
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Good Justice, Wonderful Mercy
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] We long to see justice – it surely will come – the perfect, true justice then seen to be done; and then there will be a world loving, free … so thankful for mercy …
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One Family!
Brother, sister, shy or bold, sick or healthy, … tall or short, clever, slow– a variety of all sorts, some irritate … we’re all related humankind: every individual matters –
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I like the way you've
Posted on Wed, 04 Nov 2015
I like the way you've captured this bit of escapism, Cassie! 'no cause to hide, I can be who I am'
Read full commentIt does seem a pity when people feel they can't be themselves in the real world, though others use the term 'I'm just being myself...
Posted in what goes up
I catch whisps of where you
Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015
I catch whisps of where you are coming from, but then revert to feeling your playing with the reader with a mixture of eerie and trying to provoke discomfort, always with your rolling rhymes and rhythm, mixing a real message with a bit of...
Read full commentPosted in Limbo
I like what you have written
Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015
I like what you have written about the false glitz and warmth at Christmas, the wearying distractions to true delight and happiness, satisfying service, and worship.
The early part also made me think of 'when the time had fully come, God...
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Pleasant companionship
Posted on Tue, 03 Nov 2015
Pleasant companionship warming the hard seasons. Interesting interjection of the respite in winter from summer labours. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Novemberesque
gives the feeling of no-one
Posted on Wed, 28 Oct 2015
gives the feeling of no-one to remember and grieve him, memory of him blown away. Sad. Rhiannon
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This did make me think, Tina,
Posted on Tue, 27 Oct 2015
This did make me think, Tina, of so many who feel the loss of a daughter or son of whom they never had good memories, a loss double. Memories so sweet must hurt so much, but you wouldn't have not had them, I'm sure.
I did so like the last...
Read full commentPosted in Baobabs and Bedouins
This is very effective. The
Posted on Sat, 24 Oct 2015
This is very effective. The early part and the contrast.
If it is how you are feeling now, I would say, Seek out that music of heart again! Personally, of course, I would pray, and read God's love letter (the Bible) to me when feeling...
Read full commentPosted in Silence in my heart
This reminded me somehow
Posted on Fri, 23 Oct 2015
This reminded me somehow about the book of Ecclesiastes, where the imperfectness of everything, incompleteness in this life is shown. I think maybe I'll have to come back to this, there's so much there, so many different metaphors to think about...
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bit of fun, quirky. Dreamy
Posted on Wed, 21 Oct 2015
bit of fun, quirky. Dreamy view, then the slog (reinvigorated?) Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Monday Night
I liked this too, though I
Posted on Wed, 21 Oct 2015
I liked this too, though I also thought you might think of a stronger climax line. The last but one seems to balance the third - disjointedness and then your world coming together, presumably a sense of things making sense, fitting together,...
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