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It Begins
“Do we really need to have the music this loud?” “What?” “I said…. Do we really need to have this music so loud?” “What? I like it.” “I can’t think...
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When it Comes to Family
“Will you marry me?” So many thoughts are going through my head, so many feelings: the joy, the fear, the almost-surprise; but the one that looms...
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A New Day
“Will you marry me?” He’s adorable. He’s so earnest. He goes all out, he’ll be kneeling there in front of me with the ring poking out of its velvet-...
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Lovers
We live beneath a citrine sky, Until it washes purple, Then aqua, Until a deep black canvas studs itself with jewels, Until a sunrise detonates, And...
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Discovery
I went out to try to find myself. And I found myself, two storeys up, in a compact, one-bedroom flat, overlooking the sea. # But to begin: I suppose...
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soft, charmed; the sort
Posted on Sat, 25 Aug 2018
soft, charmed; the sort length works with the simplicity to make this poem stand out as something 'extra.' Very nice.
Read full commentPosted in The rift between us
Cute, funny, topical. Great
Posted on Fri, 04 May 2018
Cute, funny, topical. Great poem. Casting my vote for the Orang-utans too. And rainforests. And continued life on Earth and so forth....
Read full commentPosted in Palm oil or Orangutans?
Clever. Intriguing. I liked
Posted on Sun, 14 Jan 2018
Clever. Intriguing. I liked this one. It leaves an adequate amount of mystery for the story to remain in your mind after reading it. I always like a story that just scratches the surface and leaves some unanswered questions.
Read full commentPosted in Clock Is Ticking
I like the moody blue shadows
Posted on Sun, 31 Dec 2017
I like the moody blue shadows. Nice poem.
Read full commentPosted in Solace
Nice portrait. The character
Posted on Sat, 16 Sep 2017
Nice portrait. The character comes alive in a poem that feels as if it's about more than it says 'out loud'.
Read full commentPosted in Heels
cute, quirky fan fiction.
Posted on Sat, 10 Jun 2017
cute, quirky fan fiction. Loved it :)
Read full commentPosted in when plungers touch, the secret confession of Dalek 366 second draft
I like this. Took me a
Posted on Tue, 10 May 2016
I like this. Took me a couple of paragraphs to catch on to the fact that the story is being told from the antique's point-of-view. I think the antique (and the sparing detail about exactly what it is added to the story) definitely has a 'voice...
Read full commentPosted in Cornucopia
Not that hard it seems :) I
Posted on Thu, 03 Mar 2016
Not that hard it seems :) I like this, it provokes an emotional reaction with a nice economy of words. Welcome aboard.
Read full commentPosted in HAL 2104 and Dave.
Oh, wait: Plum! (from "thumP
Posted on Mon, 17 Aug 2015
Oh, wait: Plum! (from "thumP LUMps") Nicely done :)
Read full commentPosted in Sweet Bun Hidden Fruit Puzzle! (IP)
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