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The Long and Spectacular Life of Agnes Magnusdottir

Prologue: 1950 New Year They had done everything, diets in which they ate only raw vegetables, visited specialist doctors, timed their love making to...
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You are writing a book. You worry if you will be able to write a book. If people will like it. If it will be a bestseller. Or sell even one copy. To...
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Ginny. Part 4. Ginny in Paris.

Upon his arrival in Paris Ginny spent many days, in wonder, wandering the wide boulevards and narrow streets of his new home town; Rue Lepic, Rue des...
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Ginny. Part 3. Man Ray.

Charles opened the door holding an ActionMan. “I don’t like to leave him alone,” he said. “I suspect he’s been trying to poison my food.” Ginny...
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Ginny. Part 2. the stranglers’ underpants

And it was that Summer, death of mother, metamorphosis from boy into girl and back again, that Ginny and Charles posted a notice on the board of...

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I loved it. Was there in 1991

Posted on Wed, 03 Mar 2021

I loved it. Was there in 1991. I was a student. And in Milwaukee. As per Flamingo Hotel. It's all true! (Well, not quite.)

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Posted in New Amsterdam

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It's great. 

Posted on Sun, 28 Feb 2021

It's great. 
 

One point of style. After a lot of your direct speech, you have, 'sais' and then a present participle...

'McDade sais, tryin tae sound authoritative'

'Scanlon sais, noddin'

'ah sais, scramblin fur...

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Posted in The Party ay the Year (Part One)

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It's lovely. But very sad. 

Posted on Wed, 17 Feb 2021

It's lovely. But very sad. 

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Posted in Lyrebird

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Great stuff. Glad you got

Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2021

Great stuff. Glad you got jabbed. Now you're a red arrow can you loop the loop? 

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Posted in Pad Life: The Joy of Jabbing

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Really? I can't believe it's

Posted on Tue, 19 Jan 2021

Really? I can't believe it's been that long. You know, it felt really comforting in this horrible current climate to return to something warm and reassuring. Write some more! 

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Posted in Craven Unraveled

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Really enjoyed this passage

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

Really enjoyed this passage to India Paul. 
 

Drew. 

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Posted in The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh

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I agree. One great poem after

Posted on Fri, 08 Jan 2021

I agree. One great poem after another. 

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Posted in Night With Her Train Of Stars

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Excellent Paul. 

Posted on Thu, 31 Dec 2020

Excellent Paul. 

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Posted in Happy New Year

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Really good story. 

Posted on Wed, 30 Dec 2020

Really good story. 
 

You've left your edits at the end? 
 

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Posted in The ticket (Chapter One)

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The last line made me laugh.

Posted on Thu, 17 Dec 2020

The last line made me laugh. I was plagued by a robin during the writing of Flamingo Hotel by a robin. It used to come and tap on the kitchen door. I would scare it away, scare it away. Then it would go to the front door. Tap there. 
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