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It's great Mark. But how old
Posted on Sun, 02 May 2021
It's great Mark. But how old is the narrator? I'd say some of the language is not a boy's voice.
"Ol’ Paddy Gannon – the former Caretaker, I should say – was the heartbeat of the estate"
"former caretaker" sounds too formal. "...Read full comment
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