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Simon, you are always so hard
Posted on Mon, 20 Sep 2021
Simon, you are always so hard on yourself. I love your writing, so unique. You also, nearly always, hint at meanings just out of reach. Murakami does this, but in a completely different way to you.
And so, I definitely recommend...Read full comment
Posted in The Wall
I would flesh this out more.
Posted on Wed, 08 Sep 2021
I would flesh this out more. What was the room like? What did she look like? Not overdoing it.
And there is too much direct speech. Read it out. Does it sound the way someone speaks?
I like the story tho...Read full comment
Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 3
It was in the days I had an
Posted on Thu, 02 Sep 2021
It was in the days I had an agent. I think I was trying to write a thriller....Read full comment