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The Long and Spectacular Life of Agnes Magnusdottir 15

1961 "Can Uncle Vickers read to me? Please mum. Please dad." Vickers precluded the question by pushing himself up and putting a hand flat on Agnes’s...
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The Long and Spectacular Life of Agnes Magnusdottir 14

Extract from The Ministry of Complaints Hans Walter Neumann couldn't remember his journey home. All he knew was that now he was staring at his own...
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The Long and Spectacular Life of Agnes Magnusdottir 13

1956 part 2 "Two buggers together. What do you say? It'll be jolly good fun." The next time they met up, at another viewing of Casablanca , neither...
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The Long and Spectacular Life of Agnes Magnusdottir 12

Chapter 8. I insisted Eldur drop me on the edge of town. He had already gone to enough trouble on my behalf and the last thing I wanted was for him...
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1956 "She is, how shall we say, different." Mary and Edmund sat side by side in front of Miss Quillen, their daughter’s teacher. "Quite brilliant in...

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224 of my comments have received 237 Great Feedback votes

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Congratulations Ed! No flies

Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021

Congratulations Ed! No flies on you. This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day. Please share! 

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Simon, you are always so hard

Posted on Mon, 20 Sep 2021

Simon, you are always so hard on yourself. I love your writing, so unique. You also, nearly always, hint at meanings just out of reach. Murakami does this, but in a completely different way to you. 
 

And so, I definitely recommend...

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Posted in The Wall

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Really good story. 

Posted on Tue, 14 Sep 2021

Really good story. 

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Posted in With or Without You

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The history lesson works, I

Posted on Sat, 11 Sep 2021

The history lesson works, I think, because it's told in such a particular specific voice. 

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Posted in Troubles

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I would flesh this out more.

Posted on Wed, 08 Sep 2021

I would flesh this out more. What was the room like? What did she look like? Not overdoing it. 
 

And there is too much direct speech. Read it out. Does it sound the way someone speaks? 
 

I like the story tho...

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It's hard not to overdo the

Posted on Mon, 06 Sep 2021

It's hard not to overdo the sentimentality in these things. And you've got this pitch perfect. It's really lovely. 

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Posted in Gentlemen and Players

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As above. I love both the

Posted on Sun, 05 Sep 2021

As above. I love both the poem and the tale. And I want to eat some Korean food. It used to be my favourite thing but there aren't many Korean restaurants in these parts. 

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Posted in The Swallow's Broken Leg

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Excellent! 

Posted on Fri, 03 Sep 2021

Excellent! 

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Posted in Coyle Loyal

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It was in the days I had an

Posted on Thu, 02 Sep 2021

It was in the days I had an agent. I think I was trying to write a thriller.... 

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Congratulations Mark. Another

Posted on Thu, 19 Aug 2021

Congratulations Mark. Another really good council estate story. 

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