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StoryThe Long and Spectacular Life of Agnes Magnusdottir 2 drew_gummerson122 years 6 months ago
StoryTroubles Peter Bennett32 years 6 months ago
StoryPie Chart Man Mark Burrow222 years 6 months ago
StoryBeing Careful What You Wish For Ed Crane212 years 6 months ago
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StoryTicking Ewan82 years 6 months ago
StorySpain II Simon Barget82 years 6 months ago
StoryMaria and the Bellasis Family 3 jeand82 years 6 months ago
StoryThe Long and Spectacular Life of Agnes Magnusdottir 6 drew_gummerson42 years 6 months ago
StoryWebWorld (5.2) rosaliekempthorne12 years 6 months ago
Storyas if my last hoalarg112 years 6 months ago
StoryWhat did Jesus do? celticman132 years 6 months ago
StoryGentlemen and Players Ewan42 years 6 months ago
StoryThe Swallow's Broken Leg onemorething92 years 6 months ago
StoryHead Simon Barget152 years 6 months ago
StoryOn Giving Up drew_gummerson42 years 6 months ago
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StoryCoyle Loyal Peter Bennett72 years 6 months ago
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Artur and Guillaume (part 3)

He starts to arrange it so he, Guillaume and Vivienne, this being the young beauty’s name, are reading the same book at the same time. In this way,...
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Artur and Guillaume (part 2)

This is the problem. It is not as if he can just apologise, say it was all a big misunderstanding. I’m sorry old chap. No hard feelings. But he has...
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Story of the week

Artur and Guillaume (part 1)

Artur lands heavily on his skinny Gallic arse as he is thrown unceremoniously from the door of Les Jolies Filles brothel, Rue Guy de Maupassant, in...
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Minnesota Fats

Minnesota Fats There isn't much great fiction about pool. In fact, the only book I know of any repute is The Hustler by Walter Tevis. It was made...
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Flamingo Dreams

And in other news. My book, Seven Nights at the Flamingo Hotel , which appeared here on AbcTales between October and December 2019 is to be published...
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288 of my comments have received 309 Great Feedback votes

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Really good story. 

Posted on Tue, 14 Sep 2021

Really good story. 

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Posted in With or Without You

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The history lesson works, I

Posted on Sat, 11 Sep 2021

The history lesson works, I think, because it's told in such a particular specific voice. 

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Posted in Troubles

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I would flesh this out more.

Posted on Wed, 08 Sep 2021

I would flesh this out more. What was the room like? What did she look like? Not overdoing it. 
 

And there is too much direct speech. Read it out. Does it sound the way someone speaks? 
 

I like the story tho...

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Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 3

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It's hard not to overdo the

Posted on Mon, 06 Sep 2021

It's hard not to overdo the sentimentality in these things. And you've got this pitch perfect. It's really lovely. 

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Posted in Gentlemen and Players

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As above. I love both the

Posted on Sun, 05 Sep 2021

As above. I love both the poem and the tale. And I want to eat some Korean food. It used to be my favourite thing but there aren't many Korean restaurants in these parts. 

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Posted in The Swallow's Broken Leg

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Excellent! 

Posted on Fri, 03 Sep 2021

Excellent! 

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Posted in Coyle Loyal

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It was in the days I had an

Posted on Thu, 02 Sep 2021

It was in the days I had an agent. I think I was trying to write a thriller.... 

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Posted in The Long and Spectacular Life of Agnes Magnusdottir

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Congratulations Mark. Another

Posted on Thu, 19 Aug 2021

Congratulations Mark. Another really good council estate story. 

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Posted in Minefield

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Well done Paul. Great poem. 

Posted on Tue, 17 Aug 2021

Well done Paul. Great poem. 

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Posted in Leaving Home

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Excellent poem. Takes me

Posted on Mon, 16 Aug 2021

Excellent poem. Takes me right there. 

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