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StoryBecause Of The Color (Short Story) cliffordben50299 months 3 weeks ago
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StoryThe Worst That Could Happen andylancelot69 months 3 weeks ago
StoryEmpire State (Part 7 of 7): Escape marandina89 months 3 weeks ago
StoryFlamingo Hotel. The interview. drew_gummerson119 months 3 weeks ago
StoryA Pile Up of Boys celticman199 months 3 weeks ago
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StoryWhat The Robin Knows by Jon Young onemorething410 months 5 days ago
StoryIt's (Still) a Wonderful Life marandina1710 months 1 week ago
StoryAnd? The polar bear and the rowing boat lavadis610 months 1 week ago
StoryMr Muldoon mcscraic210 months 2 weeks ago
StoryThe Desk drkevin210 months 2 weeks ago
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StoryThe Migration of Winter Angels onemorething410 months 3 weeks ago
StorySomething You'll Have To Live With sean mcnulty1510 months 3 weeks ago
StoryGolden Memories: The Machine drkevin410 months 3 weeks ago
StoryThe DJs Who Turn into Swans Mark Burrow1510 months 3 weeks ago
Story"Dear World..." Ewan210 months 3 weeks ago
StoryScout's Honour sean mcnulty1310 months 4 weeks ago
StoryOld Friends Again hudsonmoon1311 months 4 hours ago

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The Monkey Plans. (An audio extract from Sven Goes to War)

The Monkey Plans . 1. Listen to The Monkey Plans . 2. Read the full story here . 3. Or even from beginning of whole banana here . 4. Enjoy 5. Or don'...
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Sven Goes to War. Part 10. Masters of War

Masters of War. Because Sven had Excelled Beyond Anyone’s Reasonable Expectations ( EBARE ) a medal in the shape of a Matilda tank firing upon a...
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Sven Goes to War. Part 9. Army Dreamers.

Training consisted of a Six Week High Intensity Programme ( SWHIP ) the first part of which took place ITW (in the woods). Three of the RAT s (...
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Sven Goes to War. Part 8. The Boogie Woogie Bugle Boy

Sven left for Basic Training with a rucksack stuffed with items from Delicious Gifts ; a stick of Happy Holidays rock (12p), a willy warmer with his...
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Sven Goes to War. Part 7. Pictures of You.

Dearest Sven, Our Captain, Welshman from Caerphilly. His grandfather, piccolo player in 47 th grenadiers, killed by stampeding elephant in time of...
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So sorry to hear that x 

Posted on Sun, 07 Jun 2020

So sorry to hear that x 

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Loved both it and the video.

Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2020

Loved both it and the video. 'apologies of bees' is lovely. 

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I enjoyed this one two

Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2020

I enjoyed this one two although would have liked a foxy twist in the tale once you've introduced Hargreaves and a buried dog and a loose rung and a threat. Anyway... do you know George Saunders foxy take? ...

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Brilliant. Loved it. And what

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2020

Brilliant. Loved it. And what a great idea. National Insect Week.  

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As Celticman said, good story

Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2020

As Celticman said, good story. I think you need to build up the voodoo element, introduce it more slowly. How did he know about voodoo dolls etc? And have more than one thrust of the pin. After doing it the first time there's a recovery and then...

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I mentioned Spike Milligan

Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2020

I mentioned Spike Milligan the other day. And this reminds me of him too. 

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I liked this, like the other

Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2020

I liked this, like the other one, the strange wasted characters. But like the other one I think you need to put some plot and tension in there. And when I say plot you could do worse than look at Brautigan - in sombrero fallout a sombrero falls...

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It is beautiful and sad. All

Posted on Sun, 07 Jun 2020

It is beautiful and sad. All loved pets are receptacles of pain. 

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Is Tom McNulty's the family

Posted on Tue, 02 Jun 2020

Is Tom McNulty's the family shop?

You've got too many 'de's in there at the beginning so it becomes a thing. 
 

Cathal needs to be in there in the first line. It's a cautionary tale.

 

Have you read Damon Runyon...

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If anger's in a drawer I don

Posted on Thu, 28 May 2020

If anger's in a drawer I don't want to enter it... nice one onemore x

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