So said the barwoman of the hotel terrace bar. We we looking down on the church, at a green laser light playing on the ground. It was nothing really, like something a kid would have.
Really? I can't believe it's been that long. You know, it felt really comforting in this horrible current climate to return to something warm and reassuring. Write some more!
The last line made me laugh. I was plagued by a robin during the writing of Flamingo Hotel by a robin. It used to come and tap on the kitchen door. I would scare it away, scare it away. Then it would go to the front door. Tap there.
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Great stuff. Glad you got
Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2021
Great stuff. Glad you got jabbed. Now you're a red arrow can you loop the loop?
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Really? I can't believe it's
Posted on Tue, 19 Jan 2021
Really? I can't believe it's been that long. You know, it felt really comforting in this horrible current climate to return to something warm and reassuring. Write some more!
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Really enjoyed this passage
Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021
Really enjoyed this passage to India Paul.
Drew.
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I agree. One great poem after
Posted on Fri, 08 Jan 2021
I agree. One great poem after another.
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Excellent Paul.
Posted on Thu, 31 Dec 2020
Excellent Paul.
Read full commentPosted in Happy New Year
Really good story.
Posted on Wed, 30 Dec 2020
Really good story.
You've left your edits at the end?
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The last line made me laugh.
Posted on Thu, 17 Dec 2020
The last line made me laugh. I was plagued by a robin during the writing of Flamingo Hotel by a robin. It used to come and tap on the kitchen door. I would scare it away, scare it away. Then it would go to the front door. Tap there.
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Really fabulous Christmas
Posted on Wed, 09 Dec 2020
Really fabulous Christmas story this. Loved it.
Drew
Read full commentPosted in It's (Still) a Wonderful Life
I particularly liked 'brides
Posted on Sun, 29 Nov 2020
I particularly liked 'brides of snow and ice' and their wings as 'new moons'.
They are the strangest creatures though aren't they, the evil giraffe of the bird-world.
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Well, there is The Birdland
Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020
Well, there is The Birdland Bar in Flamingo Hotel - home to (stuffed) exotic birds, a singles night, a wedding and a cat funeral.
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