Chapter 15. The first thing I saw on opening the door of my flat was Russell dressed as Batman. He had on the full outfit, shiny leather boots, fully...
Thank you. This is one of the 20 Tom Cruise stories I've written. 10 are flash, written in this voice, with the same American kids. They sit between the 10 longer stories. I wrote this over a year ago but doing my usual thing of leaving stuff for...
Quite agree. I enjoyed this
Posted on Sun, 07 Sep 2025
Quite agree. I enjoyed this too.
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Read full commentPosted in Sandwiches, Wittgenstein and a Log
As I said, Nicely done.
Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2025
As I said, Nicely done.
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Read full commentPosted in The lisping god of small things
This is excellent. There's so
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
This is excellent. There's so much tension and distance to everything - apart from his son.
A couple of things - picky - paragraphs one and two are general and then three he hears the splashing. Goes upstairs. He's describing smells. I...
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part 1 (c)
I enjoyed this feel-good
Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2025
I enjoyed this feel-good story. Nicely done.
Read full commentPosted in The lisping god of small things
Thank you. This is one of the
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
Thank you. This is one of the 20 Tom Cruise stories I've written. 10 are flash, written in this voice, with the same American kids. They sit between the 10 longer stories. I wrote this over a year ago but doing my usual thing of leaving stuff for...
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Agreed. This is a really well
Posted on Thu, 26 Jun 2025
Agreed. This is a really well written scene.
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Read full commentPosted in Ghigau 4
This is a perfect extract
Posted on Sat, 12 Apr 2025
This is a perfect extract Sean because it just makes me want to read more.
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Read full commentPosted in To Go Completely Under
Very funny. Just right with
Posted on Mon, 20 Jan 2025
Very funny. Just right with all their tics.
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Read full commentPosted in Jacques and Basil
Well, this certainly didn't
Posted on Sat, 28 Dec 2024
Well, this certainly didn't send me to sleep.
The movement of the story between the sales person and the narrator was really well done.
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Read full commentPosted in Home is where the mind is
Loved this.
Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2024
Loved this.
It's a short sharp shock of a horror story.
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