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Love Story 16
We’d arranged to meet by the coal cellar, when it was dark. I’d already checked. The lights in Mrs Connolly’s house were out. Apart from the one in...
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Love Story 15
Ali came to my room after dinner. It was too cold to do anything. So we rolled about my bed, cuddling and kissing. She moaned a few times. Flashed...
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Love Story 14
Mum made us both a pot of tea and put out a plate of Digestive. We sat at the table, knee to knee. She had her fags. I’d my biscuits to dunk in my...
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Love Story 13
Da came through for his dinner. He glanced at us talking and laughing, grunted something, as he drowned the fish in salt and vinegar. Picked up his...
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Love Story 12
Mum had a cup of tea on the go and the chip pan on to make Da’s tea. Animal fat and incinerated starch creating a sticky vapour that clung to every...
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Kicked up a gear. Her turning
Posted on Mon, 16 Jun 2014
Kicked up a gear. Her turning on him is good, but maybe express some of the doubts about Ian earlier. A kind of layering effect. His violence towards her is a good way of keeping it real.
Read full commentPosted in Ch26: Stolen July 12th part 2
silence, is often a pause
Posted on Sat, 31 May 2014
silence, is often a pause before the encore.
Read full commentPosted in War of Sounds
too many showers, but thaks
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2024
too many showers, but thaks for the vision of better things.
Read full commentPosted in Wild Side Of April
The media cover-up and stitch
Posted on Sat, 13 Apr 2024
The media cover-up and stitch up of the victims was, as we expected, trying to contain the story and dehumanise the victims. Lessons from the mining strike.
Read full commentPosted in Hillsborough
made me think of Davie Bowie
Posted on Sat, 13 Apr 2024
made me think of Davie Bowie (Ziggy) for some reason.
Read full commentPosted in Where is Everybody?
sometimes we need the wrong
Posted on Wed, 10 Apr 2024
sometimes we need the wrong kind of glasses to see. Nicely done. There's hope out there if you look.
Read full commentPosted in Eclipse
wow, insert, the title felt
Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2024
wow, insert, the title felt vaguely familiar. Then I realised I wrote it!
Read full commentPosted in Windfall.
wonderful twist at the end.
Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2024
wonderful twist at the end. Makes all that grief even more believeable.
Read full commentPosted in Dad's poet society
in other words, we don't know
Posted on Wed, 03 Apr 2024
in other words, we don't know what we're talking about.
Read full commentPosted in Black Hole
there is something primal in
Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2024
there is something primal in drums and song.
Read full commentPosted in Passion Of The Drums
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