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Steelie 15

The muffled rumble of trains arriving and departing, the continued hiss of steam escaping from locomotives follow them. Echoing announcements...
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forget me not

Limb by limb they say In that ordinary way Heart, diabetes and lack of breath That means death Best keep yakking in that slow way So you won’t wander...
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Steelie 14

Mole stands on the U-Bahn platform, his leg jiggling. The place reeks of sweat, damp woollen uniforms and thick coats pressed together, and the sour...
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Steelie 13

Brodie snatched Sharon’s phone from her hand. She’d been smiling and checking her message. He’d read them too. Before handing her back the blank...
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Steelie 12

The clack of the pool balls behind Sharon’s head, a metronome, marked the growing silence between them. ‘I better get back,’ she croaked, not really...
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1823 of my comments have received 1873 Great Feedback votes

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I'm sure there's a metaphor

Posted on Wed, 27 Aug 2014

I'm sure there's a metaphor here. Spit it out.

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Posted in Spit Out the Bugs in Your Mouth

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Kicked up a gear. Her turning

Posted on Mon, 16 Jun 2014

Kicked up a gear. Her turning on him is good, but maybe express some of the doubts about Ian earlier. A kind of layering effect. His violence towards her is a good way of keeping it real.

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Posted in Ch26: Stolen July 12th part 2

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silence, is often a pause

Posted on Sat, 31 May 2014

silence, is often a pause before the encore.

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Posted in War of Sounds

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Looks like a ready-meal deal.

Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026

Looks like a ready-meal deal. 

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Posted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (22)

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ah, sad, in a good way. 

Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026

ah, sad, in a good way. 

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Posted in Tom All Alone 16 (ii)

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it's a wonderful story,

Posted on Thu, 21 May 2026

it's a wonderful story, wondefully told, although it's not a story but  a little life. 

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Posted in Tom All Alone 15

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the fat one is fat for a

Posted on Mon, 11 May 2026

the fat one is fat for a human purpose. Reminds me a bit of one of those films were humans were fattened up for the same purpose. Doug McLure might even have been in it. 

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Posted in The Fat Ones

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it sounds so exciting. where

Posted on Mon, 11 May 2026

it sounds so exciting. where can I sign up for this fantastic cruise ship! Having worked in Butlins, I know the score. Butlins is just the name for a seacruise for the dummies. 

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Posted in Life on Berth

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true and beautiful too. 

Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2026

true and beautiful too. 

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Posted in After You'd Gone

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She can do both, but I'd go

Posted on Sat, 09 May 2026

She can do both, but I'd go for A. Reminds me of the skateboarding and endless runs to get the glitches and the trick right. 

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